Oh, I dont know if I abhor or adore that ending. I’m glad that Hermione sought retribution and found peace, but I wish you diverged from canon in one more place.

You know you’ve written a remarkable piece when your reader is sitting in stunned silence, while processing the strong emotions evoked by your writing. Wow. What a journey.

Omg. Omg omg omg. I am so impressed with her reaction and indignation and so sickened by D’s reaction to it. I need a moment before I feel like I can handle the last chapter…

Oh wow, im glad it was a vision. It seemed like an abrupt and shocking departure from your style. And when I thought it was real, was the first time I was 100% convinced Severus was an irredeemable Death Eater.

That was amazing! Thank you for putting yourself and your art out here for us to read.

This was a Rollercoaster of emotion. Decently well written. I do think some more foreshadowing could have been dropped as well as Hermione being a little more logical rather than emotional. The twist ending is giving V for Vendetta vibes. There were times when I finished a chapter and hated you. I don't think I could stomach reading this again tho. But good job on coming up with a compelling premise

Oh man, I was ready to hate Snape but that was a hell of a twist. I fully believe Dumbledore would be capable of that tbb. Kinda wish Hermione and Snape recovered and reconciled but I understand that was hella traumatic. Awesome story!

Wow! This story had me in a choke hold. So many twists and turns.

He basically told her she was a pity fuck, damn he could have just given her a soft lie rather than such a brutal truth. And then they obliviated her. That’s some evil ish they did to that girl.

Dark and painful... Poor thing. Dumbledore is always a piece of shit

Quite amazing, but a little sad about the twist. Still, it's a good twist and a great read.

gods i think that was polyjuice snape, an imposter no hermione runn

well done, was on the edge waiting to see how this resolved... bittersweet for sure.. and good on her for saying she was going to press charges! again, well done!

Oh my god! That's was incredible! Your writing is so engaging. I was so engrossed! The ending was amazing! Ahhhh!

that was intense.

Al principio es ta muy buena pero no dudo en decir que todo el final fue una mierda que asco de final