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Guest chapter 3 . 4/8/2020
I like this story .
beccithenerd chapter 31 . 3/26/2020
I honestly cant believe how you ended it, I'm furious, and hysterical in my laughter, I had to choke back a sob when she was obliviated, and again when we returned to the shrieking shack.
Im absolutely gobsmacked, and emotional, so thank you, for writing something that brought all of those emotions from me.
Beefuf chapter 1 . 2/3/2020
I keep returning to this story. It haunts me and makes me cry! But it is an excellent story. Thank you!
Smerby chapter 31 . 12/21/2019
This fic was... frustrating. You write like English is your second language, so I preface any criticism with admiration for you writing a piece of this length in a secondary language. But so many things could have been helped by a good beta. There was definitely a lot of stilted language, and it took until Chapter 29 for you to finally use the right form of breathe instead of breath which you used incorrectly seemingly everywhere in the fic. A very frustrating thing is the unevenness. This story had such great promise with its plot and the twist. but the foreshadowing just left a lot to be desired. And most frustrating of all, you did a great job capturing Snape's voice! So many scenes I could picture him saying and doing perfectly. But this Hermione was so OOC that you could as well have said almost any other character and it would have worked. Ginny? Lavendar Brown? A self creation? This character was not Hermione. I actually laughed out loud when at one point Hermione apologized for acting immature, because I thought the same thing for so many chapters. Her dialogue, her thought processes, her decisions all were just... not Hermione. We've seen Hermione stay strong and stoic and sensible under literal torture from Bellatrix, remain suspicious and analytical over nearly every plot device save Lockhart, etc. I would have loved to see actual Hermione in this situation, not this odd teenage creation.
alwayssev19 chapter 30 . 12/1/2019
Dumbledore is mad
alwayssev19 chapter 30 . 12/1/2019
Wow... it's so...
I think I'll never forget this ending. It is very... impressive.
saint weasley chapter 31 . 11/24/2019
This fic... this story... It destroyed me. It's dark, cruel, beautiful. I love how you used short sentences, because I think longer paragraphs would not have had the same result as your writing style. And the suspense, the mystery, the epic plottwist at the end... Thank you. I hope I will never forget this fanfic.
Erika Leigh chapter 31 . 10/13/2019
I have never seen other stories with this twist. I think you are the first
Erika Leigh chapter 29 . 10/13/2019
I feel like it will be like BAM this was a test from the order of the Phoenix to see if u would crack under torture and give us up we had to make you prove your loyalty
Nina05 chapter 31 . 8/23/2019
I really don't like it when the bad guys get away with their actions, I wish I had know it before reading. sorry writer but your last two chapters ruined the whole story
Lilianz939 chapter 31 . 7/12/2019
THIS IS SO VERY GOOD! The best story I ever read! Omg I don’t even have word for this...so sad, so...the ending was NOT what I was expecting! Thanks for writing this amazing story! I enjoyed it very very much!
Lilianz939 chapter 30 . 7/12/2019
...I’m done. This twist...I need to sleep
Lilianz939 chapter 26 . 7/12/2019
:O this is my face right now
Lilianz939 chapter 25 . 7/12/2019
Oh. My. Goodness. What?!
Lilianz939 chapter 25 . 7/12/2019
Gosh this is getting sadder and sadder
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