|Reviews for Tempus|
| Kiowa2010 chapter 12 . 8/15
This was amazing. You sure can tell a good story. You did a great job jumping back and forth in time while still keeping your facts and timelines straight. I especially appreciate how you showed the new past changing, while Harry was in the past. So complicated, but so good! Thank you for an awesome read!
| Raouim chapter 12 . 6/7
This is the best Fic time travel that I ever read the end is so cute I really love your fic
| AJ Picard chapter 12 . 5/14
this is really good
| Inu-Neko2 chapter 12 . 3/11
Demn, this was a good read. I loved it. Liked the team of this story! One of the better long sided stories I've read in some time. SS/HP are the best!
| Fenris Jin chapter 12 . 1/2
Success! The space-time continuum is saved! XD
I love this story!
I kind of laughed when Remus married Hermione. Third time is the charm? Careful there wolf, or you'll be the next in running for the Black Widow. I'm sure Mrs. Zabini will not appreciate being dethroned. XD
And Tobias Orion! Well, I'm pretty weirded out by their kid's name. Orion I probably understand, Severus allowed Harry to name the kid anything except James or Sirius, hence, Orion.. But Tobias? I didn't think this AU had a nice Tobias. It could probably be assumed as such. Although, I'd have thought they'd honor Lily, maybe named him Evan or something.. Better yet, a daughter would have been nicer. Black shiny hair with those green eyes? Yep, can we get a girl version of Toby Orion sometime soon please? XD
Awesome work. Loved the lemons and plot! Thanks for sharing! :)
| Fenris Jin chapter 11 . 1/2
Well, technically speaking.. Dumbledore didn't jump to the wrong conclusion.. just the wrong student being debauched. XD
Anyway, Albus had his knickers in a twist about an obliviation charm being performed.. Some hours after the fact? Why the delay? XD
That was a pretty long wait, I was enjoying reading Harry and Severus make use of the lonely corridor and then relocate to Harry's chambers to swap body fluids for some time before they were interrupted by Remus... combine that with an hour of depravity-free quality time between the two other men.. Well, that's atleast two or more hours! Dumbledore must have been busy.. XD
Oh, I see. So that's what it meant about the charm not holding for Remus, and Severus remembering through Penseive memories.
Harry should have remembered not to rely on Dumbledore too much. Didn't his last brush with AK, a courtesy of the joint effort from Albus and Riddle's handiwork? XD
Everyone is going Obliviate happy in this fic. Lockheart must have been a student at this time and have taken notes. XD
| Fenris Jin chapter 10 . 1/2
Although I'm a tad disappointed with the Severus staying bottom..
I'm rather tickled with the chicken and egg scenario.. The one where it's actually Harry who led Severus in this exciting debauched relations when the latter was a teen, and then vice versa. XD
Anyway, I wonder how Harry will pull a Slytherin on Remus.. Hm.. maybe he'll just pull a Gryffindor and hope to Merlin that Remus will do the same. XD
| Fenris Jin chapter 9 . 1/2
Must be lucky to have a lover with seer blood. Is sight sharing common? XD
If Harry did change the future, who's going to Top? I've already have my preference. Hopefully, Severus is a switch. Fingers crossed! XD
Although, if this is the case, Harry would need to go back to his time.. and also, my head hurts for the space-time continuum. XD
| Fenris Jin chapter 8 . 1/2
Hmm.. Sirius likes Severus huh? That would explain that other unexplained hate between them.. perhaps another incident of UST. Tsk, tsk, Severus can't help getting embroiled in such Slashy scenes. XD
Now I kind of wish Harry didn't time travel and Sirius and Severus started a vanilla romance. Emergerd! You just got me interested in another slash couple! Main ship is still Snarry in that front though. XD
| Fenris Jin chapter 6 . 1/2
The Invisibility Cloak.. Mwahahaaha. That was a hilarious turn about. XD
I wonder if Harry will do something about the Marauders now that they might threaten his play time with Severus. XD
On that note, will the Marauders try to defend a classmate from a sexual predator..
(Sorry Harry, seducing a student on the first day, no matter how much in love you are to their future self is still questionable. XD)
..or will they chalk it up as a slimy Slytherin plot? XD
| Fenris Jin chapter 5 . 1/2
Dumbledore found a way to get Harry back to his time! Blimey! XD
After the delicious little tryst with Severus, what I thought Harry should say to Albus was..
"Can I take that to go?" XD
I won't blame him if he did. Would be nice to have a boy toy like Severus back at home. XD
| Fenris Jin chapter 2 . 1/2
Looks like Harry is positioning himself to be Severus' master instead of a certain Tom Riddle. Although, the master part being having a more specific definition.
So.. saved by the Bell..a? I think I like her. I'm sure Harry doesn't agree though. XD
| Fenris Jin chapter 1 . 1/2
This looks like an interesting read. :)
I usually prefer a Dom!Severus, but with the age reversed I think I can get behind a Submissive version of him under Harry Potter. XD
| RenTenTen chapter 12 . 9/15/2015
Wow. That was super kinky. But also, extremely beautiful. I don't think I've ever cried because of a PWP, but it guess it WAS more than just porn. Five stars and three thumbs up.
| kase519 chapter 1 . 9/28/2014
Well thank one way of coping