Uh oh... I hope Infi bashes her head in. I pretty much saw that coming, seeing how ruthless and how much of a liar Hunter J is in the anime. I'm excited for when we check in on Gary, as well as seeing how he's doing physically and emotionally.

Nice chapter. Not much to say other than I’m glad Weavile didn’t die and Electivire got a chance to unleash some stress.

I knew things had gone too smoothly. That ending was absolutely terrifying. I expected some rouge attack from some unseen force, not that silent murder.

For some reason I want to say those black and blue blurs were a Lucario, but I can never be sure with this book. That was a hefty chapter, and my heart goes out to Gary and his... multiple losses. I’ll leave it at that.

AUGH that was a really good chapter. I love Drapion so much and I loved Paul’s in the anime because it was a complete beast. I wonder whether or not Paul will get a Skorupi later in the story and evolve it, or if this will be the only time they pop up. I’m anxious and excited for this next segment. Good job building suspense and drawing me in this chapter.

That was a sick chapter. I was kinda iffy at first about Newton but after reading some more I kind of like him as a character. Paul seems to be coming around slightly, and Gary and him seem to be getting along somehow. At least somewhat. Is it possible that Paul’s Pokemon didn’t pass out because they were so used to his strict training regimen that they just took in the power directly and weren’t affected by it like the others were? I don’t know, but that’s my hypothesis.

That chapter was rough. At first I thought the Gengar was one of Paul's Pokemon, but I'm wrong. It was really creepy too, and I thought Weavile was going to die at one point. Well... here's Gliscor, being the comic relief and reminding me of A CERTAIN POINT IN WHICH SOMETHING HAPPENED THAT COULD'VE BEEN PREVENTED BUT NOOOOOOO PEOPLE HAD TO DIE! *screams* I love Ursaring however, and Weavile too. In fact I love pretty much all Sinnoh Pokemon. I can't wait to see more of this fanfic and what it has to offer.

That was another interesting chapter. However I have a feeling that magma is going to die or be used as bait eventually, and I fear the same could possibly happen to Gary's Houndoom.

That was a cool chapter! I'm eager to see how Gary and Paul will clash, because their personalities are so different. I'm also eager to see what this story has in store and how they'll work together as it continues. Great job as usual.

This first chapter was amazing! I can't wait to read the rest. I like your choice for his last three Pokemon. I love Houndoom so much and Nidoking is cool beans, but I hate Skarmory. Maybe reading this will change my mind. I'm excited to see the events of Hearthome, and am looking forward to see how Gary will react to them. I'm also looking forward to seeing how he'll handle the new dosage of power Electivire has, especially after seeing Pikachu's power surge in your other book. I'm also looking forward to seeing how much damage fully evolved Pokemon can do, seeing how much Ash's did in their first forms.

Goddamn, she's evil.

Glad to see this back! It was a great chapter. Very excited to see J and what her part in all this will be like. Paul, Newton and the others aren't dead just yet. I hope they can make it out of this somehow.

That's a great way to leave us in the edge of our sents like that.

Omg that ending surprised me so much and I'm so excited for what's going to happen next! Also great job in writing Gary's reaction. I have all my limbs so I can't really say for the accuracy but it felt really natural to me and I hope he gets better soon! Also his electvire is such a sweetheart

In a weird way I'm glad Hunter J is becoming the new main villain. She was such a dark character for the anime and she chafed under its limitations and was forgotten after her death. Here, in the apocalypse with story arcs where consequences matter Hunter J seems set to become an utterly awesome villain thanks to her sociopathic selfishness.

Yeah, I had a feeling it would go that way... Newton, when someone like Paul offers to commit murder for you, just accept :/ It's not something that'll happen again. Especially if they don't get out of this alive. Can't wait for the next part, I'm anxious to see what happens next.