Reviews for GoodBye
hitlersasshole chapter 1 . 1/26/2013
Grammar was less than perfect. Honestly wish it was longer. But, whatever.
Aerobesk chapter 1 . 9/17/2012
OMG that is sooooo cute! luv it! XD but jeez i read the Hot Soup and Colonel Graff and couldn't breathe for like two minutes! XD
myjumpingsocks chapter 1 . 12/16/2011
Awww love it! That was rather perfect.
Jessicasaurus chapter 1 . 11/19/2011
I think ate some of your spaces.

I would have liked a little more length and substance. This seemed kind of flat when I read it. Because people do this kind of thing so much in the fandom, you need to work to have yours be interesting. Spelling and grammar were good except for the eaten spaces and a few other places. I'm not an Ender/Alai shipper at all, but I do think you made it work, so good job! Just remember to keep it interesting in the future and use lots of details.