|Reviews for The Consultation|
| nature of things chapter 23 . 9/12
I just finished reading this again. You really describe emotions very well. I was so sad! But the happy ending is worth being sad for a while.
| nature of things chapter 9 . 9/11
I'm glad that Martin talks back to L. In a lot of the stories he just mutters or says uh.
| nature of things chapter 24 . 9/4
Excellent story. I'm so glad that you showed how much the Doc loves his son. I knew that he did but it's so good to read and feel the tender moments that you described to well. Well done1a
| nature of things chapter 4 . 9/4
Reflections - I had always thought that Doc wanted to leave PortWenn and go back to London because that's where Louisa was. His phobia came back when she came home so he had to stay where she was and now, also, his son. Feasible?
| nature of things chapter 2 . 9/4
This is a very sad start. Hope things get more cheerful. Not a complaint. It's certainly captured my interest.
| beth.zipay chapter 24 . 2/11
Very well done backstory to the show. I enjoyed it!
| brownstudy chapter 24 . 8/13/2013
Just finished reading this remarkable story. The writer's knack of finding just the right nooks and crannies to tell her story, and the addition of the subplots (just like the real Doc Martin show!) added much lovely texture. I also liked the little bits of history, esp. of Louisa and Al, that really clicked into place. Most of all, the story really pegged Martin's attitude and speech patterns from the show; several of his conversations with Ruth and Louisa sounded as if they could have come from the series. I hope many more readers discover this very emotional and affecting story.
| D. Charles chapter 24 . 5/14/2013
This was so engrossing and so professional it is really hard to believe you are not a published author. Or are you? It was fabulous and wonderful, I loved every moment of it. The relationship though taken from the series was made realistic and true to life. I know the heartache of loving someone this way. Each of you too proud or too afraid to tell the truth about your feelings. I love Martin Clunes and I could just see both there faces as I read the words of your novel. Lets face it, that is what it is a novel. If only the show was really like this. Thank you for this beautiful entertaining story.
| Carol C chapter 24 . 8/6/2012
This is an excellent story and very well written. I think you have great potential as an author. Go for it!
| DeclanS chapter 24 . 7/26/2012
This story has been much more than a simple retelling; instead we have been treated to parallel scenes showing us love stories of couples young and old which could benefit the two central characters. We also are witness to the thought processes engaged in by Martin and Louisa behind the scenes.
We see the haemophobia realistically manifesting itself and thus bringing a more natural and direct conclusion to Martin's dilemma about leaving.
Thank you for not making this a single chapter story as was originally intended. We readers have enjoyed the expanse of your creativity, imagination and deft writing style.
| Bodmin chapter 24 . 7/14/2012
Nice end to a nice story. Thank you for writing it for us.
I agree with Louisa that boredom will be the least of her worries, and Martin seemed to have understood the need for comfort. Maybe the disaster will bring them closer together. We can just hope for series 6.
I liked your last scene a lot.
| Boots1980 chapter 24 . 6/28/2012
This chapter is brimming with wonderful subtleties: Martin looking at the crumbling caulk and deciding he will now have it fixed as he is staying in Port Wenn. Who but our Doc would equate such an important decision with the state of his kitchen sinks caulk? Martin making fish for Louisa and an omelet for himself and then the fish burns. Lucky Louisa now does not have to force down another dinner of fish! After Louisa disrobes Martin - or actually "de-suits" him, you end the story with the line: "And that will SUIT (emphasis added) her just fine." Martin's decision that "it will be in his best interest to keep quiet," shows that he can learn to not say the wrong thing if Louisa is making it worth his while. The best is Louisa's declaration of love without benefit of an addled chemist. The only thing that would have been better would be if Martin returns to the bedroom with a packet of chocolate biscuits...
Excellent writing with real emotion, understanding and care for the characters.
| fanficfan71 chapter 24 . 6/26/2012
A great finish to your story. Thanks for sharing. I hope you write more.
| LuvJaneAusten chapter 23 . 6/12/2012
I just wanted to let you know that I really like your story & look forward to your updates I get through story alert. The scenes you write are so believable. You are a very talented writer. Please keep going. Can't wait to read more!
| Limaccia chapter 23 . 6/10/2012
If I were Martin (& of course I'm almost the complete antithesis of him except for this one thing) after I'd had my coffee and listened to some soothing music, I'd wander down to Louisa's and see if she was already up. Not that it'd be a long-term solution, but he could offer to help, tidy up, etc., and at least save Louisa a walk up that darn hill by taking James back with him.
Ever heard about different love languages? How couples get into trouble when they have different love languages and so misconstrue each other? Usually people have 1 primary and 1 secondary. For example, Martin's primary love language is clearly "Acts of Service," while Louisa's is "Words of Affirmation." That's a recipe for trouble:
Words of Affirmation
Actions don’t always speak louder than words. If this is your love language, unsolicited compliments mean the world to you. Hearing the words, “I love you,” are important—hearing the reasons behind that love sends your spirits skyward. Insults can leave you shattered and are not easily forgotten.
In the vernacular of Quality Time, nothing says, “I love you,” like full, undivided attention. Being there for this type of person is critical, but really being there—with the TV off, fork and knife down, and all chores and tasks on standby—makes your significant other feel truly special and loved. Distractions, postponed dates, or the failure to listen can be especially hurtful.
Don’t mistake this love language for materialism; the receiver of gifts thrives on the love, thoughtfulness, and effort behind the gift. If you speak this language, the perfect gift or gesture shows that you are known, you are cared for, and you are prized above whatever was sacrificed to bring the gift to you. A missed birthday, anniversary, or a hasty, thoughtless gift would be disastrous—so would the absence of everyday gestures.
Acts of Service
Can vacuuming the floors really be an expression of love? Absolutely! Anything you do to ease the burden of responsibilities weighing on an “Acts of Service” person will speak volumes. The words he or she most want to hear: “Let me do that for you.” Laziness, broken commitments, and making more work for them tell speakers of this language their feelings don’t matter.
This language isn’t all about the bedroom. A person whose primary language is Physical Touch is, not surprisingly, very touchy. Hugs, pats on the back, holding hands, and thoughtful touches on the arm, shoulder, or face—they can all be ways to show excitement, concern, care, and love. Physical presence and accessibility are crucial, while neglect or abuse can be unforgivable and destructive.