|Reviews for The Red Tree|
| Magicgirl29 chapter 1 . 11/13/2011
I really like this, I like how you wrote Angelina :) I think- despite the fact that he has ben injured- Fred wouldn't have been that cold with her to begin with.
I love the detail and way you wrote this but the beginning confused me.
" When she arrived at the deep green sea of linen with the little red tree growing from its oceans, Angelina pulled a chair up to its side. She had to get on her tip toes a bit in order to land in the chair, " I couldn't really follow that without getting confused. But aside from that it was brilliant, great job