|Reviews for His Little Bird|
| PaleandBroodingsGirl chapter 20 . 1/13
Wow! Dark, disturbing, entertaining! One of my favorites!
| PaleandBroodingsGirl chapter 14 . 1/12
Man, can you write a horrible, foul character!
| PaleandBroodingsGirl chapter 12 . 1/12
This story is awesome!
| PaleandBroodingsGirl chapter 11 . 1/12
Wow, so intense! (loved the Harmony/harmione, btw!)
| PaleandBroodingsGirl chapter 4 . 1/11
Ooh, naughty Draco! I think his reticence in most of this ch, though, is sneaky Slytherin M.O...intentionally deceptive.
Really enjoying this!
| Jocelyn Blair chapter 20 . 12/29/2019
I can’t wait to read the sequel! Thank you for taking the time and effort to write this story :)
| Keiara Brinn chapter 20 . 12/16/2019
Darkish, some good moments for sure
| Just Altais chapter 20 . 11/10/2019
Charlotte, thank you for this!
The last doc I’d read was “Manacled” after that I thought I wouldn’t be able to get myself into another fanfic the same way again. But you manage to do it!
Really, really, really, thank you!
Dark, possessive Draco is one of my guilty pleasures, I’ve read only another one, in Spanish that has the same plot line: Imperio, but your is more involved. I love the addition of Harry, I really loved this!
Thanks again, I’ll immediately go see the sequel.
Have a great day!
| Mimi2030 chapter 1 . 10/26/2019
Wow, you changed this story compared to the last time I read this amazing chapter. I remember following you around 2013 or 2014 and this series is off the chain. I envy your talent for writing and I love your good works. I hope no haters and flamers gets you down.
| JennKM chapter 20 . 9/14/2019
There are stories I come back to again and again, and your Little Bird series is one of them. I re-read them time and again, and I live them a bit more each time. I’m starting again and just wanted to let you know it’s done just so well. So well.
| LovelyOrihime chapter 5 . 9/14/2019
I decided to reread this story because I love it so much but I realized that quite a bit been changed. It’s still good! Just wondering why. I had to double check the title, it caught me off guard. Are the rest of the stories in this series been changed as well?
| Zoia Olubas chapter 8 . 8/21/2019
Makes me think of Shakespeare's Cymbeline Act 2 Scene 2
The crickets sing, and man's o'erlabour'd sense
Repairs itself by rest. Our Tarquin thus
Did softly press the rushes ere he waken'd
The chastity he wounded. Cytherea,
How bravely thou becom'st thy bed! fresh lily,
And whiter than the sheets! That I might touch!
But kiss: one kiss! Rubies unparagon'd,
How dearly they do't! 'Tis her breathing that
Perfumes the chamber thus; the flame of the taper
Bows toward her, and would under-peep her lids,
To see the enclosed lights, now canopied
Under these windows, white and azure lac'd
With blue of heaven's own tinct. But my design,
To note the chamber: I will write all down:
Such and such pictures; there the window; such
Th' adornment of her bed; the arras, figures,
Why, such and such; and the contents o' the story.
Ah! but some natural notes about her body,
Above ten thousand meaner moveables
Would testify, to enrich mine inventory.
O sleep! thou ape of death, lie dull upon her;
And be her senses but as a monument
Thus in a chapel lying. Come off, come off;. [Taking off her bracelet.]
As slippery as the Gordian knot was hard!
'Tis mine; and this will witness outwardly,
As strongly as the conscience does within,
To the madding of her lord. On her left breast
A mole cinque-spotted, like the crimson drops
I' the bottom of a cowslip: here's a voucher;
Stronger than ever law could make: this secret
Will force him think I have pick'd the lock and ta'en
The treasure of her honour. No more. To what end?
Why should I write this down, that's riveted,
Screw'd to my memory? She hath been reading late
The tale of Tereus; here the leaf's turn'd down
Where Philomel gave up. I have enough:
To the trunk again, and shut the spring of it.
Swift, swift, you dragons of the night, that dawning
May bare the raven's eye! I lodge in fear;
Though this a heavenly angel, hell is here. [Clock strikes.]
One, two, three: time, time! [Goes into the trunk. The scene closes.]
| Bellabemo chapter 1 . 7/28/2019
* Raises handPlease dont take this as offensive, but why the change? I thought there was the fight ? And draco carrying hermione to the infirmary? Please dont take this offensive, now I'm kinda confused. Will there be slight changes in later chapters ? I like how it starts off.
| Guest chapter 20 . 6/30/2019
Waaa it's goold. Awesome. I like this kind of daco. Thanks for writing this and i can't wait for reading the sequel
| KyliaQuilor chapter 3 . 6/14/2019
Very interesting so far.