Reviews for Dealing with the Heat
Tarkus chapter 1 . 3/15/2014
Really good story, i prefer lime rather than lemon because it's far more fluffy and romantic and here, a little bit funny. You manage to make Tenten very sensual, and i like this Naruto who has none experience with womman. Great story !
ToshiroHitsugayaBladeOfThinIce chapter 1 . 12/5/2013
Did you add a part and can you add another chapter
willam and jack and jake chapter 1 . 6/11/2013
nice
Grumpywinter chapter 1 . 8/19/2012
Nice, would have liked to seen more raunchy sex but this was good still.
OBSERVER01 chapter 1 . 2/12/2012
pretty good
Winto-kun chapter 1 . 1/26/2012
Now that was fucking HAWT.

Please continue.
JPMod chapter 1 . 12/5/2011
Nice hot story! Love that you had them slowly work into the sexual situations without going overboard. :)

Planning to do a sequel? Like having them going all the way? :)
Inuyonas chapter 1 . 11/30/2011
wow...this is fantastic
ash chapter 1 . 11/26/2011
oh snap you should write more!
ShadowWolf Zero chapter 1 . 11/14/2011
Good one-shot. The irony is that while this is a one-shot lemon,this isn't another mindless sex story. Liked the story and also enjoyed the hot moments. I like it when a lemon seems actually realistic.
alchemists19 chapter 1 . 11/14/2011
A good one shot, it is well written and fun to read
MissingNo chapter 1 . 11/14/2011
It was good. The only issue I had was it was too much forplay and not enough actual sex. But the foreplay was ggod too.

I give it a 8/10