|Reviews for A hot day|
| makayla.lowery.73 chapter 1 . 3/31/2013
That was hot
| featherdusters chapter 1 . 1/11/2013
amg this was hot :3
found this under the pruaus tag on tumblr, really happy i found this :3
this was awesome x3
| why hello thar chapter 1 . 12/30/2012
That was sexy. I read tthis while I was bored in english and the guy sitting next to me kept trying to see what i was reading! I nearly got caught by the teacher coz i kept nearly laughing i wonder what the teacher would say if he saw this... Great writing and keep it up! I have nothing bad to say about this, it was the perfect smut for me!
| himurarikuo chapter 1 . 12/9/2012
I loved this - it read just like a script to a very naughty play
This made me giggle:
..."Stop looking!" Austria yelled.
"But there's… so much to see…"
And the way they use their first names...3...and this:
...'Leisurely, Prussia spread Austria's legs apart.' ... soo sexy... ha ha ha!
Thank you for the fun
| JulyBeS chapter 1 . 7/4/2012
That was hot as the day they were.
| Taigalily chapter 1 . 4/18/2012
Ok, I'm gonna be honest. Your grammar is a bit off, and you really need to work some with organizing and structuring your story. Sometimes, your choice of words is wrong or just doesn't fit the situation, and in a few places you use the commas wrong, or just too much.
But, the story idea is pretty good, I didn't notice any spelling mistakes, and the smut is nice. :)
| Alisper11 chapter 1 . 1/20/2012
| IchliebeAtzen chapter 1 . 12/5/2011
I have to say a very drool worthy story
| AizenIsMyBro801 chapter 1 . 11/27/2011
| Swampman chapter 1 . 11/17/2011
I read this while I was bored in Math class. It was so hard not to burst out fangirling xD
| Kikusui179 chapter 1 . 11/16/2011
*nosebleed-passed out on floor, ghost/spirit typing this*
Oh my Lord...
Hot days should come around more often, nu?
| YaoiOverlord chapter 1 . 11/14/2011
Hot sex is best sex
| Fantasia V chapter 1 . 11/14/2011
Really original and well-written. I LOVE the fanfics w/ words in different languages so... yeah... keep it up