Reviews for Pack Bonding
mattcun chapter 1 . 10/9/2014
plz write more
CentauRita chapter 1 . 4/8/2014
Banana Ramma 'packed' it in ;}
paulandsethlover69 chapter 1 . 11/26/2013
Me like. Great story!
LrafaelxD chapter 1 . 5/28/2013
I love it! it was super hot! :)
darius prince of the sea chapter 1 . 5/16/2013
Whoa loved that
Cheyanne.Autumn chapter 1 . 5/5/2013
Super hot, but yeah the whole Leah thing was a touch creepy... But other than that it was perfect! Great job!
alykat14 chapter 1 . 4/1/2013
Wow that was intense! Very good story :)
rosesmom61 chapter 1 . 1/11/2013
Great descriptive story. Leah adds a bit of creepy, though.
JJ Twi1ight chapter 1 . 12/21/2012
Well done keeping it intimate and sexy at the same time. It was creepy having Leah there, but I think you know that. In your mind was this a one time "initiation" thing or something that the pack did often with each other? I did like that it wasn't really a "gay or straight" thing but more instictual and primal. Speaking of primal, great job with his phasing and describing that experience and his new senses, etc.
Twilightlover20071 chapter 1 . 6/11/2012
Would LOVE to see Leah's pack "Bonding"
radiate689 chapter 1 . 5/28/2012
Hot
SagaDevotee chapter 1 . 3/30/2012
Holy moly, hot damn!
The lady loves the dark chapter 1 . 2/19/2012
That was GREAT! HOT!
chocolatelovergirl chapter 1 . 1/10/2012
:)
MacGyverTape chapter 1 . 12/6/2011
Ooooohhh that was hot, visceral, tender and HOT. Very well-written and excellently descriptive. xx
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