Reviews for Trust is a Must
Guest chapter 18 . 4/15/2017
DONT STOP
LilLinkGirl chapter 18 . 5/22/2016
Sooo, life still crazy?
silverwolf chapter 18 . 3/29/2016
write soon
Guest chapter 18 . 11/14/2015
What the fuck! Why did u stop?! Not ok!
Suicide1478 chapter 1 . 9/30/2015
FInish it or meone else do it; this story needs to be finished. Its just that great
narutoxsasuke124 chapter 18 . 8/10/2015
Update please
narutoxsasuke124 chapter 7 . 8/9/2015
Nakama is tara?
The Shade Has Been Thrown chapter 18 . 11/13/2014
Two years later...
Continue! Continue! Continue!
bookworm3334 chapter 18 . 7/22/2014
PLEASE FINISH FOR THE LOVE OF GOD PLEASE I NEED TO KNOW WHAT HAPPENS!
Guest chapter 18 . 7/1/2014
Plèeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeees finish this it's great
Guest chapter 18 . 5/30/2014
Please finish the story
bullyhater81 chapter 18 . 5/21/2014
Please don't let this great fanfic discontinue, a fanfic like this should be completed.
silverwolf chapter 18 . 3/2/2014
so when will he reveal his secret
HMP chapter 1 . 1/17/2014
First, to the author's note: Lol! It's not a very long one-shot if it's 18 chapters; that would be called a story darlin' ;).

Some suggestions:
I think you could describe the scenery more. Even though we all know what the Titan tower looks like and its interior, the story still seems kind of dull without the descriptions. Plus, everyone describes the tower differently, so you can kind of make an impression on your readers by how you describe it. Also try to bulk up your fight scenes. I love the way you describe how BB moves and fights, but the fight seemed... action-less. I know writing fight scenes are hard - I have trouble with them myself. I tend to spend an hour on youtube watching people beat the stuffing out of each other and stick figure animations to map out a scene.

I think you could go a bit more in depth with how everyone thinks the fight will turn out. Give reasons for why Raven thinks that BB will win, and give reasons why everyone else doesn't. Try experimenting with Ravens emotions too; as much as they are a part of her, they are also separated.

Good luck and I will continue reading!
Lolasauras-Rex chapter 18 . 10/12/2013
So Beast Boy knew about the cheating and said nothing what a dick.
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