Are u going to write more ? So far it is good

Omg I love it and yh.
I need to read the sequel now :)

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And THAT is what happens when you mess with the boyfriends of mermaids!

Hey :)!
This Story is great, and I think you managed to Keep the characters as they really are, like in the Show. Cant wait to read the Sequel now ;)

poor Rikki , with reporters looking everywhere for her :[

I love chapter 1 ! I think that cleo should atleast tell her family! I am putting this under my favorite stories!

Awesome story, I enjoyed reading this!

I really enjoy your story! It's an excellent tail (excuse my pun) of what could have happened. I think that you should have a chapter in the future with dr. Denman rediscovering mermaids! I think that would be an amazing tail

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Ummm, if Chris Pine wrote me a note the way Dillon wrote one for Rikki, I would die of happyness! I love the whole idea of telling the world. Also Rikki and Zane NEED to get back together. There perfect for each other! Love the romance. I also love how Lewis is always ready to be there for Cleo. She's such a lucky girl to have a man like that! There is one word that describes Cleo and Lewis' relationship; T'hy'la. (means friend, brother, and lover in one, soulmate. Language: Vulcan)
Any way love the story

Thanks for the fantastic story looking forward to the sequel

my story about h20 is that thair life is grate but as a mermaids is verry hard when thay have to hide it from thare famley it must be hard but just think if it was real life stuff i love h20 some of the sens are incredible thay are truely worth it and if the people are reading this i hope you like my post about h20 by the way my name
is montana norris from cumberland county middle scholl im 14teen years old

YEA! I'm going to read it right now. :)

WOW! This is an awesome story. I love the drama, and the characters were all spot on. I can't wait for the sequel, I'm sure it will be just as great!