What the when Ginny said she could control them, I laughed. I don't know why

This book is fucking hilarious.

The lisp was pretty funny haha.

You know despite this being a great shock, you made it believable. Unbelievable

I really like your sarcasm author.

Loved it!

Great character development arc!

Loving this Harry!

Great story, and great chapter! Though I can't help but wonder what happened to Luna? And really what happened to Neville?

Okay, I feel a little bit bad about mentioning headquarters so much in the last review but to be fair at least to me it wasn't very clear that you had moved them to a separate headquarters. Which I guess is the smart thing to do and I didn't expect that of the order. I'm confused as to why they didn't use the place they used in the first place that in itself doesn't really make sense and yes I know it's because it is not Canon it is fanfiction still. I'm also still having trouble with the weasleys were kind of mentioned but not specifically the twins Neville wasn't really mentioned except that he had to be found so I'm not really sure what part he played altogether and he sent a paper that had both the location and the password which doesn't make sense cuz you really only need the location that in itself is the password but also where he got it from because even if they like him they're not just going to hand out the location so he can send it to anyone it just doesn't make sense.

I'm honestly not trying to nitpick your story I really do like it but I've come up with another issue, sorry. In this one it is Snape telling Harry the reporters animagus form. At this point it seemed like he was in at least 6 year considering that Sirius you know was dead at the beginning and Harry tortured Bellatrix. Hermione and Harry had already captured the reporter and kept her in a jar at this point so they very well knew what her form was I don't see why he was both upset and surprised. And since he had already been in headquarters touching on a previous topic even though McGonagall is the new secret keeper the secret and password or whatever would not have changed so he would still remember it. And if you're playing it on that angle then Neville even if he found the twins would not necessarily be able to get into headquarters at least not right away and probably without a truth serum and even if he could he will probably not try to save the dark Lord and he will not be able to pass on the secret to Harry that again he probably should already know because it didn't change.

This was another good but frustrating chapter. Harry has been in and out of headquarters essentially more than once and I mean yes also before he was kidnapped so really he should be well aware of where the headquarters are and here he is acting like he doesn't know that they exist practically. Secondly since it's not yet all out war the twins are both between headquarters and their shop because they would have started it up by now, so not having any idea where they are either is also pretty stupid. And lastly at least for this chapter is Ginny would have kicked up way more of a fuss about being included or going on a mission or what have you even taken in to account her boyfriend's feelings she is no doormat she is fiery and feisty or whatever she would not have put up with him essentially telling her what to do.

Okay several questions / confusions and thinking maybe the chapter wasn't your greatest. If Harry was using the elder one still and it hadn't given up it's allegiance then even with wands something like the spell he was using should have still ripped off the door from its hinges regardless of anything else. Next I was pretty sure that you said in an earlier chapter that the absolute only one who could take the ring off of Harry was Voldemort himself so Harry would not have been able to take it off even to shower and on that note how does Bellatrix Even know or is aware at all that it acts like any sort of porky because he never would have used it in front of her. Completely disregarding the fact that he shouldn't be able to take it off at all. And lastly even if he's Ginny's boyfriend, since Harry took him with him in the first place why the f*** isn't he torturing him halfway into insanity for basically walking away when he was trying to save Voldemort? It makes absolutely no sense especially with how wand happy Harry has gotten.

So is Lucuis (I know I can't spell that) now the owner of the elder wand? Or because since Harry had all three is he still the master owner?

Why in the hell did Dumbledore have his wand back in his grave? Because Harry disarmed him and had it on his person when he ran away and used his own portkey.