Reviews for The Freemark Conspiracy
Grey cat chapter 2 . 3/16/2013
You have fantastic writing skills! Love the series btw!
Eliza Aacher chapter 1 . 11/22/2011
Really good so far- this is a great build up and the story is intriguing and has a good flow. I like how you've written the characters too, from what I've seen of them.

Stoked for the next chapter. :)
Norbit chapter 1 . 11/15/2011
This looks really interesting so far! I like stories that focus on minor characters. One thing, though - when it says "discus terms" I think you meant discuss. Just a little spelling error, but I thought I'd point it out. Keep up the good work!
DemonSurfer chapter 1 . 11/15/2011
I really enjoy this little series you have going on, and I'm glad there's a new installment in it. Even more glad it's multichapter installment, as otherwise where this chapter cut off would be most unsatisfying.

I think my favorite part of your writing is your interactions between Vortex and Onslaught. It's very natural, and always amusing.
Ell Bee Someone Else Now chapter 1 . 11/14/2011
Ooookay. I'm up for the Story Alert! Onslaught is nearly as much fun to read as to write.