Reviews for Many Are the Deceivers
Skybirdday chapter 17 . 8/7/2017
I have read other Red/Gold stories and I love their interactions in both Storybrooke
and The Enchanted Forest. I love this. Thank you for creating this story.
Mari Wollsch chapter 17 . 3/25/2016
super story xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx
rumbeller25 chapter 17 . 10/10/2015
i liked it i love rumbelle to but i like redgold to
SALIGIA-the seven deadly sins chapter 17 . 2/3/2013
I must say this rare ship was a gem, and that your spin was something I found much better than the spineless and whiny canon Belle any day of the week, even if the end seemed a little abrupt.
Serena Thorn chapter 16 . 8/21/2012
Aw, love their true reunion!
SakuraBlossom58 chapter 15 . 6/22/2012
OH! I love this and I hope everything works out. But Emma is Ruby's friend so she's not entirely alone.
SakuraBlossom58 chapter 11 . 6/22/2012
I guessed that Barbara was Repunzel lol. I knew it! so... Raoul? as in, Christine's fiance in Phantom of the Opera?
perilxxx chapter 15 . 5/27/2012
beautifully written! I cant wait for more :)
Serena Thorn chapter 15 . 5/26/2012
So glad you're back! And yes, flash drives are life savers. As for this chapter - amazing once again. I love how you showed Red's anger beneath her surface while she maintained the guise of comforting Ashley while she cried.

The Ruby and Ashley side was great too, showing that even in SB Ashley still blames Gold for the deal no one forced her to make. And yay for Ruby finally remembering! Like I said, amazing job. :)
nicksmom3612 chapter 15 . 5/26/2012
Hey, great to see you back. This is my favorite Rumple/Red story. Looking forward to the next chapter.

Syaunei chapter 4 . 5/14/2012
Oh my, you had me laughing so hard!

""Oh God!"

He grinned.

"That'll do."" - this part killed me, I swear!

I love the way they interact!

The last sentence was just brilliant! - He begged her indulgence in signing a contract at a later time as his hands were full. She came and laughed in one shuddering breath.

God I love this couple! :D
nicksmom3612 chapter 14 . 3/14/2012
I have really enjoyed your story. It is very well written and the plot is well thought out. I noticed that you haven't updated in a while, and I hope all is well with you.

Hope you are able to continue with this story as it is one of the best Rumple stories I've read.
WTfan86 chapter 14 . 3/12/2012
Wow, great job. Sorry, I thought it was complete. I made a mistake looking at another window from another story. My bad. But now you leave a cliffhanger like that...damn you dearie! lol Please continue? :)
WTfan86 chapter 12 . 3/12/2012
Hi there,

I am aware your story has been completed a while back, but I have to say, I love this story, not for the sex scenes, but because you go above and beyond, creating the thoughts, the motives, and how you use references to the darker, earlier verstions of fairytales...I LOVE IT! The main reason I watch OUAT is because they add a little darkness verses the fluffy happy shiny disney cartoons. I am currently writing "her name is Jade Miller." A bit different from yours, my OC cares for another, but is held hostage from a spell of Rum's from her last life to the next. He develops a sexual infactuation with her. I like how he has it with Red, but it transforms into another whole being of need,(love). I use your story for inspiration, and your writting is exceptional. I do the best I can with my being.I didn't have such a great education. But I love your work. :)
illeria chapter 1 . 2/21/2012
I really hope you finish this - it's definitely one of the best OUaT fan fics I've read. Feel free to just ignore all that stuff about Belle :)
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