Reviews for Broken
Chilami Lynn chapter 1 . 3/9/2014
sad. just sad. i like the story though.
Diosa Luna chapter 1 . 10/15/2013
:( no la valoro como debĂ­a.
Mina Phantonhive chapter 1 . 12/18/2012
That is really painful, but Goku kinda deserved that.
Ayamari Uta chapter 1 . 4/12/2012
Touching. Very serene, and sad. I loved it. It was very intense, and I feel sorry for poor Gohan, and poor Goku. I liked the end, it is as if she was there to witness it. Nice job.
husband-of-shizune chapter 1 . 3/25/2012
That last part was deep. So beautiful. Chi-chi's scent in the wind; very poetic. It tugged on my heart strings and made me shed a tear.
Dario chapter 1 . 2/14/2012
That was single handedly the most beautiful one-shot I have read thus far.

That last sentence was pure genius and it actually made me choke up.
Melaina chapter 1 . 2/13/2012
Okay, I'm just going to go read some happy fanfics now.

It was really good, but sad. :'c
gue22 chapter 1 . 12/10/2011
my poor goku!

oh man, gohan slapped him, not that he didnt deserve it

that was so, so, sooooo sad for me to read, especially since its all true, poor chichi, poor goku

wonderful stuff, i really enjoyed reading this. the poem was just fitting.
Godschildtweety chapter 1 . 11/22/2011
sad but good
Darkness Angel-Ai chapter 1 . 11/15/2011
Awww I almost cried! It was so cute but soo sad!
Marie Nomad chapter 1 . 11/15/2011
This is a pretty sad fic. I'm curious if the lyrics are yours or someone else's. I can't tell. I do desire more detail about the mourners. But it did reflect a sad reflective Goku. It's a nice read.
Discombobulator0329 chapter 1 . 11/15/2011
Wow, that was really good! Are you going to do more? Really you could stop right now and it would be fine, but I would love if you continued it!