|Reviews for It Will Rain|
| amandac3 chapter 1 . 11/30/2011
I can understand being in love with two people, always a hard decision. Good luck!
| PepsiBlue26 chapter 1 . 11/30/2011
this story is kinda weird for me.. did bella just really realized he loved another man on her wedding day? and she said that edward was her universe? whats up with that? weird..
| ChocolateLover82 chapter 1 . 11/28/2011
Such a hard thing to be in love with two different people and not wanting to hurt either of them.
Good luck in the contest.
| Taneva Rose chapter 1 . 11/17/2011
I like this story.
Occasionally the dialogue felt a little stiff "that's wonderful to hear."
but other than that I thought you did a great job of having both characters (jacob and edward) be good.
and not turning it into melodrama.
it felt real.