|Reviews for The Promise: Part One|
| kataang1028 chapter 23 . 8h
I loved this story! All the characters were in character, and I felt this was straight from the show! And the Kataang moments were great! Keep up the awesome work!
| TcamNinja chapter 23 . 10/1/2017
Hey MasterFirebender84, i wanted to thank you for the amazing story you have written here. I just finished Avatar the last Airbender series about 2 weeks ago, and i wanted more. Your story was great, and im an absolute Kataang lover! I hope you keep writting more, cause I'll read all of it!
| Guest chapter 4 . 12/13/2016
wha is this about ?
| GeorgiaDawg99 chapter 23 . 2/18/2015
Are you not gonna write anymore of this story? It's SOOOOO GOOD. Please please please please please please please continue!
| GeorgiaDawg99 chapter 2 . 1/25/2015
Ok, so I already read The Promise graphic novel series and I think your version is amazing too. I like how you are so detailed with your writing and how the words just flow os well. Plus, I'm a HUGE Kataang fan, so I love the Kataang moments. :) So, since you are such an amazing writer, I was curious if you could write one about Aang and Katara's wedding? If it's not to much work I mean. I would totally add it to my community. I already added this story to my community (my community is called Kataang Central by the way). So yeah. Once again, awesome job on the story!
| dominique.peltier.31 chapter 23 . 11/28/2013
GAAH! Come back to us! It's been over a year since you've updated this story and I just love it! You need to finish this one and start part two! Come back!
| dominique.peltier.31 chapter 22 . 11/28/2013
That was an awesome chapter! I look forward to the next chapters! Keep writing!
| dominique.peltier.31 chapter 18 . 11/27/2013
OMG! I just love the interaction between Katara and Zuko. That was fantastic! The fact that Zuko is so powerful and important but his friends can act like that around him is just too funny! I have to say the whole thing with Sokka teaching the Imperial Firebenders how to handle Appa was great as well!
| dominique.peltier.31 chapter 12 . 11/26/2013
I really like this chapter as well! I have to say that you do pretty well dicribing the fight scenes. Some people make absolutely no sense when writing them.
| dominique.peltier.31 chapter 3 . 11/26/2013
I really like how you had Sokka really accept Aang and Katara's relationship. Most people make it where he's against it at first, then ok with it. I also like how he kinda talks to his mom about it. Keep writing!
| legendofthevoid chapter 12 . 8/28/2013
you play legend of the void, do you
| TexanAndIKnowIt chapter 23 . 6/7/2013
MORE MORE MORE! I WANT MORE!
| Alabama-Rory chapter 3 . 3/30/2013
I like how Sokka was talking to his mom, it was touching.
| Eve chapter 10 . 3/7/2013
I was laughing everytime they called each other sweetie, it's just so funny for some reason! And they were totally over using it, making it even funnier!
| bird chapter 23 . 1/3/2013
The end is so cute.