Reviews for Mistake
j7r3l chapter 1 . 11/19/2011
Hun, I realize that. Fanfiction made it all single spaced and took away all the quotes around dialogue. sorry. I'm gonna fix it.
AlwaysUnrivaled chapter 1 . 11/15/2011
Good start-but suggestion!

"when someone is talking, you do this," I said. " -that thing "

just read a book and you will see what i mean! You do it sometimes, but to make it easier to read, make sure you do it everytime! Good job though
Cassia4u chapter 1 . 11/15/2011
awesome start and please keep writing! :D please use double spacing though it will make it sooo much easier to read! :D