Reviews for Pools of Tiger's Eye
anon chapter 4 . 2/7/2012
Mhhh, what do i see here? A youngling in clutches of fanfiction. Muahaha, you are ours now!

An amusing ficlet, i have this silly smile then i read it. And a rare Oc*snape pairing too. Delightful!

The oc seems to be fine, but a little marry sueish. While I may have seen better, writing style is still prety good. Plot has this taste of something, unique.

Concluding, its a fic I would read and would like to see continued.
too lazy to login chapter 3 . 12/23/2011
Hello Princess Calamity864!

Good job with the story so far, Fern sounds very interesting. Here's some feedback and what I thought...

Remember- whenever a new character speaks, it is a new paragraph.

Also, may I suggest to clean up your summary? Summaries are what really attracts a browser's attention. Therefore, having a good one will really pull in more readers so they can review and tell you what they think. Removing the "I suck at summaries" statement can do you no harm.

Other than that, Pools of Tiger's Eye looks like it can turn into a wonderful fanfiction. Hope you update this soon :)
Phoenix1592 chapter 2 . 11/27/2011
ah, that explains why Fern got himself mixed up with Death Eaters

Fern's name among his 'people' is Bambi!

Slytherin would better suit Fern
Phoenix1592 chapter 1 . 11/16/2011
Slytherin or Ravenclaw would be a good idea for Fern

I'm not happy either with J.K. Rowling for killing Severus,

I would suggest you read Delilah Kellwy's - Sorely Missed and Sadly Remembered

It's a tribute to Severus, I believe you would enjoy reading it,

it may also give you some semblance of closure