Reviews for A Better Kiss
WhoLoverFTW chapter 1 . 10/5/2016
Guest chapter 1 . 1/8/2016
every time i watched the movie, i thought how hot it would be if something happened. but as you know it didn't. & you my man/girl just fulfilled that little fantasy of mine. its good. i liked it a lot. keep up the good work! ;-)
CatLover444 chapter 1 . 1/2/2014
Very Good!
ladygirlwhatever chapter 1 . 5/23/2013
This was amazing! Thank you so much!
whitewolf12 chapter 1 . 1/27/2013
I think from all the stories i read this one my number 1. I give this à 8 in my book.
TruShadowKing chapter 1 . 1/22/2013
very hot
abercrombie chapter 1 . 10/13/2012
you should make more chapters it was good.
Mikado X Goddess chapter 1 . 7/28/2012
great writing! - I LOVE Alien Swarm - Kevin is exactly how I pictured him live-action - though I think Gwen could have been prettier - not too sure about Ben - anyway loved this fanfic!
Lil cuzi chapter 1 . 6/18/2012
Think more ben 10
Lemons And Limes And Fluff chapter 1 . 6/8/2012
This was good! You took something and changed it into a lime. Well done. Personall, I like Gwevin rapes better, like my fics, but this was a good read.
Guest chapter 1 . 2/3/2012
Write more M's. Yours are very good!
PurpleHightops chapter 1 . 1/26/2012
(i dont want to login...)



Perfect Lemonade!

sunshine and tears chapter 1 . 1/1/2012
this was epic...:) do another.
awesomesause chapter 1 . 11/17/2011
thats was epicly painful! has been a good lemon like this in a while! do another! :]
midnightblue08 chapter 1 . 11/17/2011
hotness! i so love kevin and gwen!