Reviews for Working Lunch
Charlene91 chapter 1 . 12/7/2011
So good! I like it so much and I like your Raydor. And Brenda... aww, so cute! Great job, kisses!
foolcklw chapter 1 . 11/19/2011
You don't really mean to stop here, do you? No, no, no. Go on. This is good, you're good and I like your Raydor. Keep-it-up! It's an order :)
grrriliketigers chapter 1 . 11/17/2011
What a wonderful little story! I love Sharon's introspection. Very very well written. I'm really glad you came to this fandom! It's kind of crazy to me how many of us DWP and The Closer people seem to overlap so I'm glad you've joined us too :)!
TheHamsterInMyMind chapter 1 . 11/16/2011
Ah! I didn't even realize you were watching this, but I'm so glad you are! I really like this and the character study. I love Sharon's inner voice, and the last line? Wonderful. :D