Reviews for Longing
Guest chapter 22 . 2/3
You used a line from another move said by the same actor 'No ones gonna harm while I'm around'
Lexie Daughter of Athena chapter 24 . 1/3
I really love this story! I'm just dying to know what happens to Bella and Hermione. Hope you update soon!
Ctrogan chapter 24 . 8/29/2013
Пожалуйста закончите данный рассказ - он великолепен.
ScOut4It chapter 8 . 6/24/2013
All that magic and the Bellatrix is using a muggle inhaler.
Hmm...
I want more Narcissa/Hermione since you asked.
I am indifferent about the Blackcest.
ScOut4It chapter 7 . 6/24/2013
Bella's not bluffing, just ask Hermione...
/ "I'm gonna fuck you so hard, Cissy…you won't be able to walk for a week,"/
Maybe Narcissa will fare better since she's birthed a son already and is no virgin in any sense.
ScOut4It chapter 6 . 6/24/2013
Well that was gross (Ron, ewe).
I don't think Hermione's in a position to take it again so soon...
ScOut4It chapter 5 . 6/24/2013
It seems Bellatrix doesn't know how to play with her toys without breaking them.
Pain does trump pleasure sometimes and dangerously so in this case.
She create an interesting change in their game.
I like how it was mentioned that Bellatrix internally admitted to wanting Hermione to 'fail' so that she'd have an 'excuse' to 'punish' her.
ScOut4It chapter 4 . 6/24/2013
Be careful what you wish for, eh Hermione?
Seems like a Bellatrix move.
I like how she made her keep the eye contact.
I think the ring might be burning a little too painfully.
If every time she is making a scene and therefore delayed, well maybe that's a bigger issue than 'feeling' how much she has to go.
ScOut4It chapter 3 . 6/24/2013
I like how you have Hermione drinking from the source after she gives her a magical bj.
ScOut4It chapter 2 . 6/24/2013
I'm surprised Lucius is lucky enough to get to watch the show.
I enjoyed his "excuse me!?" when Bellatrix mentioned how Narcissa 'used to be' with her.
I hope that Narcissa gets in on that action again, especially with Hermione :)
ScOut4It chapter 1 . 6/24/2013
I love that Bellatrix caught her.
I enjoy the crude talk between her and how she makes Hermione "say it!".
kashiah chapter 2 . 5/10/2013
Ch.2 little weird for hermony to be doing but very well written
CaraCersei chapter 24 . 4/21/2013
Love this fic- can't wait to see where you take it!
Guest chapter 1 . 12/6/2012
"Hermione's heart swelled. Finally, Bellatrix was going to fuck her." LOL. This line should be in every fic.
bellamione17 chapter 7 . 11/11/2012
Just wanted to say that this is my favorite fanfic of all time and I've read a lot of really good fanfics. Cissatrix is my OTP and Bellamione is pretty much my other OTP if not a close second. This is absolutely fantastic beyond belief you are my favorite person ever for writing this.
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