Reviews for Assassin of Chaos: A second life
DarthDestroyer2 chapter 12 . 5/3
That was so confusing. What was that about?
RyannaJackson06 chapter 1 . 3/13
do you know that you're such a good author?
Monica.K chapter 4 . 3/4
I'm homeschooled to coincidence much (by the way I'm 11 y old)
SmileyMiley chapter 29 . 12/20/2016
Hello, I really love this story but I just wish that you had put Percabeth back together. But it is an awesome story, nonetheless. I just wanted to say that to you, but this is good enough for the work os Uncle Rick himself! :)
Rhino109 chapter 3 . 11/21/2016
I dont get why Diodnes is immortal considering you said the people who help Olympus in the war were given it.
Guest chapter 29 . 9/7/2014
wow thjis is amazing story great job. Oh and just wanted to tell you that i appreciate the hard work you put into it
a chapter 10 . 6/8/2014
Great story! Keep writing!

But the only thing I don't like is that Percy calls him 'master' and all. I've read similar stories where Chaos treats him as an equal and I like it better that way.
Izzybella12 chapter 29 . 4/30/2014
This was awesome! If u haven't already do u think u could do a sequel? Pretty pretty please? *adorable puppy dog face* thanks for thinking about it if u haven't already! This was the best chaos story ever and I've read a ton if those! They r my favs but your story blows those out of the water! U totally rock! 3 (::)(::)
Guest chapter 29 . 3/16/2014
This was probably THE best chaos story I have ever read, and trust me I have read alot of them. ;)
Lily chapter 2 . 10/22/2013
Guest chapter 22 . 10/12/2013
Dam percy and Zoe are not doing any thing boring
Guest chapter 12 . 10/4/2013
I didn't really get this chapter with the Paradox/Percy future/past thing
WiseGirl chapter 5 . 9/29/2013
I like your story, but for the love of ALL THE GODS learn the difference between "coarse" and course. Allow me to help you -
1) Coarse means rough as in a coarse texture, or it can mean rude like "She used coarse language in our conversation". The word you should be using literally EVERY time you have used it in your story is's definition is "what might be expected". Example of how to properly use this word: Of course basic grammar is important, it makes a good story better.
Guest chapter 28 . 9/1/2013
plz hurry up..
Guest chapter 29 . 8/31/2013
Write more or I will send you to the void
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