|Reviews for What I Wished For|
| barbiedoll123 chapter 5 . 1/12
I'm glad Alice told her about that again
| barbiedoll123 chapter 4 . 1/12
I just want to cry he is alienating her from everyone i feel so sorry for her
| barbiedoll123 chapter 3 . 1/12
Jake is a jerk
| barbiedoll123 chapter 2 . 1/12
Jacob needs to know she works hard too
| barbiedoll123 chapter 1 . 1/12
| not done baking chapter 35 . 1/12
This was the slowest burn ever. Like getting a sunburn from a lightbulb, but I loved every minute of reading it. Great job.
| Tifclark69 chapter 33 . 11/27/2013
* crying *
This was such a beautiful end to a wonderful story. I can't wait to see your other stories and wish you all the best!
Thanks so much,
| Tifclark69 chapter 4 . 11/21/2013
This chapter was a powerful one for me. Dated a guy for 2 years who gave me these same kinds of messages and whom I am sure would have become physically abusive had I not gotten out. It's so hard to see that gradual change in yourself and the relationship, and I thank you for writing it so well.
| ksw3 chapter 30 . 10/30/2013
I am almost to the end of this beautiful story. The emotion has blown me away in this one. One of the sweetest Edwards created. Love him, I will be sad to say goodbye. There are many more of your stories I will read. I am Phoenixrocks1 on Twitter and Karen Coe Ward on FB. Keep in touch. Thank you again.
| Inmyownbubble21 chapter 33 . 10/28/2013
Sorry I didn't review some of the other chapters I was too busy reading I wanted to know if they got there happy ever after. Sigh they did and its so beautiful I love that ur characters are raw and emotive and god I fell in love with them all well except Jake and a few others. I can't believe this was ur first fic iv read everything you have published on fan fiction and I just want to say your one of my favourite authers and if u ever publish anything I can assure you it'll do well. Looking forward to reading more of ur work. PS your taste in music is amazing and u have me hooked on several new bands aha Laura xxx
| Inmyownbubble21 chapter 19 . 10/27/2013
I'm in love with your Edward and admire Bella's strength I hate that Jake is continuing to make her life hard x
| Inmyownbubble21 chapter 18 . 10/27/2013
Edward is perfection love love love
| Inmyownbubble21 chapter 17 . 10/27/2013
Awww charlie xx
| Inmyownbubble21 chapter 15 . 10/27/2013
God I feel so sad for her I want to kill Jake I hate that some husbands/wives make their partners feel this way emotional abuse is so discuting I want to hug Bella and take her away from Jake this chapter made me cry thank god she has her friends and Edward another amazing, emotive chapter x x
| Inmyownbubble21 chapter 13 . 10/27/2013
I hope his abuse doesn't turn physicall. Your Edward has to be one of my all time favourites and I love Scottish rose and emm x x