Reviews for What I Wished For
t17381 chapter 17 . 2/6/2012
brave girl
Addicted2fanfics chapter 17 . 2/6/2012
Good for her. I love Charlie, family always comes first.
Rhixoxo chapter 17 . 2/6/2012
Go bella for standing up for yourself :D
detroitangel chapter 17 . 2/6/2012
Well, it's definitely not smooth sailing ahead, but I can't wait to hear how Edward reacts. We know that Jacob won't let this lie. The humiliation will amp him up even more.
mom2my3kids chapter 17 . 2/6/2012
Good for Bella..
Demons4eva chapter 17 . 2/6/2012
That was an excellent chapter and really woke me up to what really happens with abuse, all kinds and I can understand somewhat exactly when she said she was wanting the dog to hit her so then she had a legitimate excuse for leaving him.

Wow this story is amazing in the facts and the way you are writing it. Such delicate matters but done properly.

So glad I found this story.


2loveybunnies chapter 17 . 2/6/2012
Yes, I am so happy and proud of Bella for finally taking this step! She is stronger than she thinks and her dad and her new friends have really come through for her! I know that Alice and Jasper would be there for her too, if she would just tell them what is going on. I hope that she does soon.

As painful as it is to keep reading about how things have been for Bella, you're doing a great job of describing Bella's feelings and emotions during this very trying time! I'm sure there will be more trials and tribulations, but so far the story is so totally believable! I really hope we move onto the happier stuff soon! She needs to start to heal and move on with her life.

I am glad to hear that Edward is staying stateside for a while, but this upcoming tour has me worried. Bella is in such a fragile state I hope she hasn't become too reliant on him. As much as I think she would benefit from hearing about his true feelings for her, she needs to deal with the situation with Jake, leaving him and the stigma that will be associated with the he said/she said games he's going to play with her. I think it's a great idea for Bella to stay away from their home and never be alone until either Jake has a hearing or he goes out of town for work. I wouldn't trust him at all, and I wouldn't put it past him to destroy all her stuff or spread lies about her to make himself look good. Ugh, I just want him to be gone!

I don't know if Washington is a no-fault divorce state, but it should be fairly simple for them to get a divorce because they don't have a lot of assets, they don't have kids, and he's obviously abusive. It might take a while to work through the courts, but it seems like a fairly simple procedure for their situation. I really hope he just kicks it before she has to go through all would be easier if she just got everything! (I know, I keep kicking myself for being such a bitch about Jake, but seriously he's so horrible! I think he's the one that's mentally ill!)...
2loveybunnies chapter 16 . 2/6/2012
OH MY GOD, I really can't believe she finally stood up to him! I really hope that she leaves him now, for good! I know there is a plan in your plotline, but damn, this has to stop! He's going to kill her one day if she doesn't leave him!

I really can't stand to watch what Bella is going through. She needs to tell her doctor how bad it really is and someone needs to step in. Her father is the fricking police chief for God's sake! Why isn't she calling and to tell him how Jacob treats her! Ugh, I can't take it anymore! Please put us out of our misery and just get rid of Jake already! (I know, that was a horrible thing to say, but he deserves whatever happens to him!).

Edward, as usual, is a selfless saint who needs to just tell Bella how he feels! It might give her the strength to just finally walk away from the pig of a husband she's stuck with!

So, I'm reviewing here instead of on TL because it's just so much easier to get the alerts here. I keep missing chapters and it takes longer for them to post over there.
HockeyChick10 chapter 17 . 2/6/2012
I just want to give Bella a hug. Loved Charlie in this chapter. Glad she has a friend like Rosalie. Even if Jacob really wasn't in this chapter, he's still a dickhead!
shayna.lane chapter 17 . 2/6/2012
I am so relieved she walked away and pressed charges and didn't just let him get away with it is sarah still alive? Perhaps she'd be a key character in giving bella more strength
Demons4eva chapter 16 . 2/4/2012
Thimbles sweetheart, thank you so much for the shout out on this chapter, makes me feel really special.

What a chapter it was too, has she really woken up to him? I hope so, and as long as she knows that his behaviour is only adding to her depression and it won't magically disappear when she leaves him then she is going to be ok. Thank goodness as well for her seeing a professional, good job he is doing.

And our lovely Edward, he is moving closer to Bella. But that leads into our prologue doesn't it, as he has his world tour and that time frame leads into it.

I love this story and will continue to get people to read it. Yes its that good.
HockeyChick10 chapter 16 . 2/4/2012
What a ride that chapter was. Holy shit balls! Go Bella!
frostedglaze chapter 16 . 2/3/2012
Oh thank god! I thought Bella would never leave. I truly hope she tells her father that Jacob tried to kill her. He knew exactly what he was doing when he shoved those pills in her mouth. It's a shame she didn't run him over.
graceinskirts chapter 16 . 2/3/2012
I think this was the reaction and action from Bella that I have been waiting for. Finally, FINALLY, she gets mad and realizes that she doesn't deserve this. So what is douchebag Jacob going to do now? Kill himself? Pathetic.
brooklynnjack chapter 16 . 2/3/2012
Finally she stands up for herself! I cannot wait for the next chapter!
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