|Reviews for The True Inheritance, or Eld Hljödhr abr Wyrda|
| Guest chapter 3 . 10/10
I like your story
| Guest chapter 11 . 8/25
You did uh gud.
| Shadowdog11 chapter 11 . 8/15
I like the ending. Good story
| Shadowdog11 chapter 10 . 8/15
I like it, but a wee bit out of character, then again you changed her character with the interaction with Firnen so I guess I've completed full circle and withdrawn that comment
| Shadowdog11 chapter 9 . 8/15
I liked this overall
| Shadowdog11 chapter 8 . 8/15
I can see how this would cause writers block. Not intending to be derogatory, this chapter feels like the end of a shot story about Nasuada/murtaugh
| Shadowdog11 chapter 7 . 8/15
I always had an issue with Arya being queen as a dragon rider. Clashed horribly with the whole lore and history. I'm glad you wrote it as such a cut and dry reason that it wasn't permitted
| Shadowdog11 chapter 5 . 8/15
Nice work toward the "confrontation"
| Shadowdog11 chapter 3 . 8/15
Good reactions and meetings
| Shadowdog11 chapter 2 . 8/15
With threats like Orrin was throwing he should've been ended
| Shadowdog11 chapter 1 . 8/15
I like the build so far, only issue I have is I think Murtaugh would've had something to say about staying in illead, what with being imprisoned there so long. Super tiny detail/idea
| FaeryMeganChase chapter 11 . 7/25
Best Inheritance Cycle fanfic so far and I'vebeen looking for over a year, good job
| ThunderSphinx chapter 3 . 7/1
Quit worshipping Murtagh and Thorn. Eragon and Arya were the true heroes of Inheritance. All Murtagh did was give Eragon a slight chance to defeat him, and in the end, it was Galbotorix's arrogance that did him in; all he had to do was redo his and Shruiken's wards but he didnt. And in the end, it was Eragon's ability and skill with silent, wordless magic that allowed him to defeat Galby. Wordless magic was something that Murtagh, Galbotorix, and Nasuada did not think was even possible. And let us not forget, it was thanks to Eragon that Murtagh knew that it was even possible to change his True Name, and it was thanks to Eragon yet again that Murtagh realized that his and Thorn's True Names had already changed. And it was thanks to Nasuada speaking with Murtagh during her imprisonment that his True Name changed. Plus, you do realize that Murtagh essentially tried to kill Eragon during their duel in the citadel? And it was, ironically, Galbotorix that prevented him from commiting murder on his unsuspecting half-brother?
Listen, I feel for Murtagh and Thorn (Thorn more so), and sympathize with them, and I do like them to a certain extent, but you give them way too much credit. You make it seem like Murtagh did all of the work; he didn't. Far from it, in fact.
| ThunderSphinx chapter 2 . 7/1
You were wrong here. Surda got Arroughs and Feinster. He did *NOT* Beletona, for which I am glad. Where on Earth did you come up with that? Lol. U may want to change it, please. :)
I can't stand Orrin. I love Eragon, Arya, and Orik's replies to him, HEHE. But where was Roran's candidacy?
| Matchbox198 chapter 12 . 6/17
I'm almost in tears, friend. This is the best fan fiction I've ever read. God bless you, and keep writing! 1 Favorite!