|Reviews for The True Inheritance, or Eld Hljödhr abr Wyrda|
| Fireshared chapter 12 . 6/17
Fuuuuuck this shit was good! Just read through it and damn this is how it should have ended. You've done more than do the story justice, 11/10
| Guest chapter 12 . 4/18
sequel sequel Sequel Sequel SEQUEL SEQUEL
| OrianBloodBath chapter 12 . 2/25
Now that was a proper ending! Thank you.
| Univers One chapter 11 . 2/4
Thank you for this story !
| Univers One chapter 5 . 2/4
| BoatyMcBoatface chapter 11 . 12/21/2016
Thank you for this wonderful story. There is little that can top this, and almost nothing that could relieve me like this alternate ending did. Atra esterní ono thelduin.
| SX74 chapter 11 . 11/28/2016
Awesome! I love the happy endings, but everything felt a bit rushed. Overall it was really good.
| sid chapter 11 . 10/24/2016
I absolutely loved the way you have written it.. I like it that it blends well with the book while making it so that all the messed up things were made a bit better. I really loved the final letter to Angela..
overall I am pleased with the story although there were some things that weren't well thought of.
A few places like the fight between orik and murtagh could be improved. Also I missed a little more alone time between arya and eragon. For me I like reading about arya and eragon more than murtagh and nasuada. But that's just me.. anyways other than that.. 3 months isn't long enough to build stuff.. like a hall and homes.. out of stone.. and a few other places could be improved..
good work! I will read other works by you.
and wait for cp to write 5th book..
| Guest chapter 3 . 10/10/2016
I like your story
| Guest chapter 11 . 8/25/2016
You did uh gud.
| Shadowdog11 chapter 11 . 8/15/2016
I like the ending. Good story
| Shadowdog11 chapter 10 . 8/15/2016
I like it, but a wee bit out of character, then again you changed her character with the interaction with Firnen so I guess I've completed full circle and withdrawn that comment
| Shadowdog11 chapter 9 . 8/15/2016
I liked this overall
| Shadowdog11 chapter 8 . 8/15/2016
I can see how this would cause writers block. Not intending to be derogatory, this chapter feels like the end of a shot story about Nasuada/murtaugh
| Shadowdog11 chapter 7 . 8/15/2016
I always had an issue with Arya being queen as a dragon rider. Clashed horribly with the whole lore and history. I'm glad you wrote it as such a cut and dry reason that it wasn't permitted