|Reviews for After Entice|
| MnMsRoK chapter 10 . 12/28/2014
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOO I need more please please please please please please
| geekyamigo chapter 7 . 10/16/2013
Like your writing keep going YOU ROCK! :-))))))
| Guest chapter 10 . 8/23/2013
Where's the chapter? :(
| Zarstley rules chapter 10 . 7/12/2013
Please update soon! I LOVE THIS fanfic. Please update with pixie dust and bunnies on top 0_0
| vanima gurtha chapter 10 . 4/14/2013
I know it's been awhile since this was written but I'm really enjoying it. Thanks.
| Omairy chapter 7 . 4/6/2013
You should have more of astley and Zara I hate nick
| Emrys Frost chapter 10 . 3/17/2013
Please finish the story soon it is so amazing I can't wait to read more
| elspethpoppy chapter 9 . 2/5/2013
this is brilliant. id love to see what issie or zaras mum thinks of the whole thing. i dont think issie will enjoy being replaced by ameilie and her mum might have a few things to say about eloping with a pixie king
| Katerina-Evasivi chapter 10 . 11/1/2012
Forgiven! Just update as soon as you can! Hope your exams gowell!
| Katerina-Evasivi chapter 9 . 10/30/2012
Update soon please! Great story!
| ImaginaryGirlxox chapter 8 . 9/3/2012
ok if you need more I ideas here is one.
you can have Nick get jealous of Astley. the usual fight scenes and Zara finding it hard to choose between the two. but of course she chooses Astley. Hope this helps a bit. Please update! :)
| Omg chapter 9 . 8/21/2012
Please update! Team Astley
| PepTalkGurl101 chapter 7 . 8/16/2012
One last thing: I just realized, I rambled in a review on the chapter called Inner RAMBLINGS Can Really Distract You, lol. If ya want help again lemme know :) oh, and of course, UPDATE.
Also lemme know if you got really annoyed by my ramble...
| PepTalkGurl101 chapter 8 . 8/16/2012
Okay weeeeellll FIRST off, may I just say how much I LOVE this chapter! Good ole' fluffy AstleyxZara, though they really need a couple name... Zastley? Ara? Zaley? Oooo I like that last one XD Sorry I ramble, I hope you don't mind... :P Anyways! If you need ideas, you can come talk to me, I may not have anything but I'm sure I could come up with something! :) But I really like just the fluffiness of this story. And OMG! Read this and chapter 9, while listening to Darlin' by Avril Lavigne, it's SOOOOO hard not to cry. . . Idk why. I think it's because you have so much emotion when you write, and this Astley and Zara, and Darlin' really reminds me of them. 'Cause in the books, Zara's always like 'I really want Astley to be happy' and then she realizes the only thing that will really help is just to love him the best she can and it's just sooooooo Astley/Zara :D It's a ZALEY SONG! :D :D :D lol I have this obsession with couple names... Okay so you story is like my Need, if you don't update I'm gonna go crazy and suck the life out of teenage boys. . . which is just creepy. . . but you NEED to update or else my Need will get outta hand. Wow, you I like this story when I just ramble like this in a review. . . I do it sometimes... but hey!
Okay to recap: Astley/Zara couple name Zaley? Agree, disagree, suggestions?
LISTEN TO DARLIN' if you haven't, and think of Zaley (much simplier to call them this)
Update or else I'll have to go suck the life out of boys. . .
I'm always here to talk to if you 1. Need some inspiration 2. Want some help, like I said, I'm sure I could think of something, but I really enjoy just the fluffiness ;P
Well, i'll stop now, lol, bye! Love this story, you're amazing!
P.S. Really lovin the username, I love using 101 in mine lol found that a bit funny. :P
*I may seem crazy, but at least I know how to live a little ;p but seriously though, if I annoyed you just let me know I'll cut off the rambling next time. If you watch Doctor Who, you'll get this, if not, oh well: I am far from a mad man with a box, but I wish I was ;P (I'll explain if you want). I actually am just a BIT weird :P
| PepTalkGurl101 chapter 9 . 8/16/2012
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THERE'S NOT A NEXT CHAPTER I CAN READ :C DISAPPOINTMENT! :C PLEASEEEEEEEE UPDATE I AM IN LOVE WITH THIS STORY! PLEASE! I FEEL LIKE BRUSTING INTO TEARS OF HAPPINESS! There totally needs to be some sort of happily ever after epilouge for this series... I don't care if Carrie Jones writes it or if it's just a fanfiction, it's just, I need something lol y'know?
By the way, amazing story :D