Reviews for Fallen Master V2
Guest chapter 1 . 1/28
Please update love this story
That Dude in the corner chapter 2 . 9/18/2016
Seriously looking forward to the next chapter. I do hope you don't abandon this fic
draco7347 chapter 2 . 5/14/2016
cant wait for new chapters
Gabriel H. Sapphire chapter 2 . 4/19/2016
Garrez24 chapter 2 . 4/17/2016
Are you going to stop this fic and the other one cause that's not cool
what are you waiting waiting for
its been 4 years
Guest chapter 2 . 2/11/2015
CrimsontheBloodyDemonKing chapter 2 . 2/4/2015
Is this abandoned?
Guest chapter 2 . 1/5/2015
PLZ update
Guest chapter 2 . 12/22/2014
Guest chapter 2 . 12/20/2014
Eo ah, woah, woah. One does not simply have a mew, and mews can only be shiny in game cause theirs only one
Guest chapter 2 . 8/7/2014
very good
ILikeSmite chapter 2 . 6/28/2014
Will this ever be continued? I want to see Ash at some point become the nice Ash again. This coldness and indifference is not what Elena would have wanted. When will he realize that?
Arceus08 chapter 2 . 6/10/2014
This one has a very good introduction and also has a major difference in the first fallen master. Better pokemons especially the white mew and I like the fact that ash is a lot darker now and better than the first but when are you going to update next? Anyways Im looking forward to it
Guest chapter 1 . 5/21/2014
can you pls. Change make an alternate sequel for secrets, where elena didn't die? Its not like i hate this fic but why do you have to make a sad sequel for secrets? I really liked it. Pls. Grant my request... i beg of you...and pls. Dont kill elena...
joseph.hendrie chapter 2 . 2/2/2014
hey this fallen master v2 sucks can you go go back and still write the first fallen master story it still is better than your rewrite sorry for the hush line kick but man go back and write and finitch the first fallen master story you have it was good and you need to end still but be for you end the first fallen master story do like 10 more chapters ? and see where you can go from there cool trust me its one of your best work ok
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