Reviews for Fallen Master V2
Guest chapter 2 . 2/11
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CrimsontheBloodyDemonKing chapter 2 . 2/4
Is this abandoned?
Guest chapter 2 . 1/5
PLZ update
Guest chapter 2 . 12/22/2014
DAMNIT DOOD, I LOVE YOUR STUFF BUT PLEASE UPDATE
Guest chapter 2 . 12/20/2014
Eo ah, woah, woah. One does not simply have a mew, and mews can only be shiny in game cause theirs only one
Guest chapter 2 . 8/7/2014
very good
Flipnhaole chapter 2 . 6/28/2014
Will this ever be continued? I want to see Ash at some point become the nice Ash again. This coldness and indifference is not what Elena would have wanted. When will he realize that?
Arceus08 chapter 2 . 6/10/2014
This one has a very good introduction and also has a major difference in the first fallen master. Better pokemons especially the white mew and I like the fact that ash is a lot darker now and better than the first but when are you going to update next? Anyways Im looking forward to it
Guest chapter 1 . 5/21/2014
can you pls. Change make an alternate sequel for secrets, where elena didn't die? Its not like i hate this fic but why do you have to make a sad sequel for secrets? I really liked it. Pls. Grant my request... i beg of you...and pls. Dont kill elena...
joseph.hendrie chapter 2 . 2/2/2014
hey this fallen master v2 sucks can you go go back and still write the first fallen master story it still is better than your rewrite sorry for the hush line kick but man go back and write and finitch the first fallen master story you have it was good and you need to end still but be for you end the first fallen master story do like 10 more chapters ? and see where you can go from there cool trust me its one of your best work ok
0769Alpha1378 chapter 1 . 12/24/2013
Why did you stop was enjoying the first 1 a lot. Better
Guest chapter 2 . 12/10/2013
Update please!
Charmeleon chapter 2 . 11/24/2013
What's happening? I see you updating for other stories but it seems like you haven't even touched this one.
Guest chapter 2 . 11/18/2013
Lol, just lol.
rob chapter 2 . 9/5/2013
is this abandoned if not plz update
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