Reviews for Prompt Collection
Ventisquear chapter 3 . 12/15/2011
Painful and heartbreaking, but very good. And convincing - that's just like Zev, to try and joke even when he's fainting from pain.

And that was a clever trick - and a cruel one, to let people think, for a moment, that it was just a nightmare only to thwack them on the head that no, it was reality.

Great job. :)
Bloodsong 13T chapter 3 . 12/10/2011
i liked this, zaxarus. it's very sadistic (yes, so am i ;) ). i especially like how zevran not only whips her, but also berates her verbally. he's a very cruel person; he's trained to be. but... i don't really see it as him working himself into a rage to be able to hurt her. instead, i see him trying to make her mad enough to hurt him back, because she has to. i know zevran isn't really worried about pain. that's only temporary.

of course, then all that changes when it comes to permanant damage. very well done, well thought out, and perfectly evil. great job :)
TryynityBelle chapter 3 . 12/10/2011
What a horrible experience you have written about.

You did it so well and I read every single word - you held my attention the entire time.

Nemain is so brave and poor Zevran having to suffer through all that.

Job well done ! :)