Reviews for Beneath The Surface
Mrs. M Cullen chapter 21 . 2/14/2013
Every chapter is perfect. I'm sooo addicted to this story its not even funny. Edward has come such a long way I love it! Telling Esme was great! Gotta love the nudger! I gotta say I was shocked he he kissed her in front of everyone. Lee has grown on me. I understand her behavior now in the beginning & I think she has made it up to Bella. Keep it up!
Guest chapter 21 . 2/11/2013
pls continue asap!
Guest chapter 19 . 2/10/2013
Guest chapter 17 . 2/10/2013
at last, he is giving in, really?!
Guest chapter 12 . 2/10/2013
Is Alice the dream girl?
Guest chapter 9 . 2/9/2013
Guest chapter 5 . 2/9/2013
cool story
xbluelipsblueveinsx chapter 21 . 2/11/2013
I love your story!
I love the nicknames, esp. "Whit."
The way you make Edward and Bella go about their relationship so carefully is so touching. You can tell they really care about each other. You Edward is so sweet.
I hope you update very soon!
artri chapter 21 . 2/9/2013
Great first for the rest?
84gemstone chapter 21 . 2/9/2013
I love Esme. Love how open he is being now, bout time :) just waiting for the night she's on deck in her nightgown and Edward can't do anything but take her.
annaharding chapter 21 . 2/9/2013
This sounds like such a great start to a fun birthday! So glad he's more at ease with showing his affection and feelings with Bella. (And I love her t-shirt!)
DBrandonCullen chapter 21 . 2/8/2013
Amazing chapter. Please update soon.
songster chapter 21 . 2/8/2013
Lovely birthday beginnings. I am very glad Edward has finally let go of some of his doubts/concerns. Boy is way too serious for his own good sometimes.
TexasTwilight77 chapter 21 . 2/8/2013
Great job as always, love how they're growing with each other. ;)
branlc chapter 21 . 2/5/2013
I'm liking the birthday surprise so far. :)
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