|Reviews for Beneath The Surface|
| justsoheather chapter 35 . 2/12
Thank you for another great chapter! I can't wait to see how Alice uses her time away. I hope she really does use the time away to figure herself out.
| KimiD chapter 11 . 2/12
Poor Bella, sometimes she must feel like a fish out of water... Lee tries but I think she is jealous of Bella and how Edward relates to her in a way he never could with Lee. There was no spark...
And now the goof has this misconception of the friendship between her and Whit... why would Whit encourage Edward to confess his feelings for Bella if he had feelings for her himself, that makes no sense. Whit's dream girl is not "visible" yet but he would Know if it was Bella don't you think... I cannot wait for Whit to see a picture of Ali... he'll know... Mase is fighting his attraction to Guppy... therein lies the problem, he spends more time fighting it than to just admit he is crazy about the beautiful brunette he had cornered in the bar... just sayin'
| KimiD chapter 9 . 2/12
love he blog site...
| dlittlegirl chapter 35 . 2/11
Totally worth the wait. I loved it. Keep up the great job and can't wait for the next chapter. :)
| fuz chapter 35 . 2/11
A wonderful chapter.
You are amazing!
| tff000 chapter 35 . 2/11
| stephi910 chapter 35 . 2/10
great chapter, def needed a little lizzy loving! glad bella is still standing up to alice, and that b&e are still going strong...can't wait for the next update!
| Scorpio11 chapter 35 . 2/10
Alice, Alice, Alice. She's really starting to get on my nerves.
I love Masen's relationship with Esme. Actually, I'm quite fond of his relationship with everyone but Alice.
| sujari6 chapter 35 . 2/10
Alice needs to grow up a lot.
| Hope4more chapter 35 . 2/10
Alice is a very frustrating sister. It's true that Carlisle can only do so much. At some point Alice's actions will hold consequences she doesn't like and will then realize what she needs to change. Bella also needs to quit trying to make it all better all the time. A relationship won't work when only one person is putting in all the effort. It's like spinning in a circle...no growth to move forward!
Glad we are moving along...just keep swimming!
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| Azulfire chapter 4 . 2/10
I was reading and couldn't help but notice you used the movie Twister as inspiration. Particularly, Helen Hunt's lines at the breakfast table.
| KimiD chapter 8 . 2/10
I am also reading EAs story as well... you both have unique stories.. I love them both
my favorite part is her wondering about his eye color changing I admit that has me curious as well...
| glo4twilight chapter 35 . 2/10
wow i can't believe we have gone 35 chapters and e&b haven't even had sex yet! *sigh*...well i guess it will be epic when it does happen..lol. i really don't like alice at all and i would love to know what whit sees in her. and masen admitting he's a mommas boy is just the fucking cutest thing ever!lol! loving this story so much still...can't wait for more and i always look forward to the update!