|Reviews for Beneath The Surface|
| Leslie E chapter 34 . 1/14
| glo4twilight chapter 34 . 1/16
wow that was such an long but awesome chapter. i'm so proud of bella she did so well and i love it when edward acknowledges and encourages her grand efforts. as for alice well i have to say that although the slap was a surprise it was frickin awesome and so . but the intimate build up that's led to the intense making out with e&b has me really looking forward more and more to when the real thing happens..they are so hot together! love your work as always! can't wait for more!
| MsHavisham79 chapter 34 . 1/16
I'm very impressed that Carlisle was so blunt with Alice and I really hope Bella gets the chance to tell her to leave BEFORE she steps up and says she is going herself, she needs to know she crossed too many lines and Bella won't put up with it anymore.
| KimiD chapter 4 . 1/15
Hmmmm jealous much... territorial a bit too... just like Whit said lol oh Edward, you are in t-r-o-u-b-l-e
| Guest chapter 34 . 1/13
| irishnlove2shop chapter 34 . 1/14
Glad she is getting more comfortable. Gopher was a full of good advice this chapter! Looking forward to the morning meeting about Alice leaving!
| TheGreenPanther chapter 34 . 1/13
Did they just dry hump? ;o) Sorry, I just couldn't help myself…and it's about damn time!
Good chapter. I wondered if Alice was fooling them/herself, etc. It's always hard to see someone close to you…I mean REALLY see them and what their actions really mean. I believe Alice is good, down-deep, but she's very immature and self-absorbed. This whole experience will hopefully help her, eventually, but right now, Bella needs to do what is right for her and the team.
Happy New Year Ladies! :o)
| sujari6 chapter 34 . 1/13
Bella's made such great progress.
| sujari6 chapter 33 . 1/13
Glad Bella saw Edward's point about Alice's behaviour.
| sarahmichellew chapter 34 . 1/13
Thank you for the update! I really love the real reason that Edward wants to wait to have sex with Bella. It's just Bella's luck that they had a close call with the shark. I love the intimate moments between E & B. Great chapter I'm glad Bella put Alice in her place!
| dlittlegirl chapter 34 . 1/13
Loved it. Great job. Can't wait for the next chapter. Keep up the great job.
| KimiD chapter 3 . 1/13
Oh my what a dilemma...
| KimiD chapter 2 . 1/13
Whoo Boy! talk about being doused with Cold water... LOL Mase is thinking "Oh Shite"
| KimiD chapter 1 . 1/13
Nice little mix up on characters and relationships... should be interesting...
I am taking a stab at this Whit Whitlock, Lee Rosalie, and of course Mase is Edward...
It will be interesting to see how the familial relations on the Cullens plays out as to who is related by whom
| flibbidyjibits chapter 34 . 1/12
Beautiful chapter! So much realized and accomplished!