Reviews for Beneath The Surface
fuz chapter 24 . 4/8/2013
Lovely chapter!

Thank you.
Tinshaw chapter 24 . 4/8/2013
Did not expect Alice to go super nova on Bella. Super chapter. The Charmin Ultra line was funny, so was the blow your mind joke..
stormy315 chapter 24 . 4/8/2013
great chapter...so i can that alice is uncomfortable with bella staying, but she cannot demand that bella gives up everything. i hope jasper can convince her otherwise...looking forward to the next chapter...
Guest chapter 24 . 4/5/2013
I knew Alice was his dream girl but I sure didn't expect her to be such a brat. Whit has his work cut out for him.
branlc chapter 24 . 4/7/2013
I think Whit has his work cut out for him with Alice. Damn she stubborn. I'm glad that Bella had no intentions of leaving the internship.
cbmorefie chapter 24 . 4/7/2013
Loved it! Thanks for the update!
Leslie E chapter 24 . 4/5/2013
Great chapter! Now if everyone would just TALK to one another...
KimberlyAnnT chapter 24 . 4/7/2013
oh Alice you are so very wrong...
Daisy Crazy chapter 24 . 4/7/2013
Oh Boy! It seems our dream couple has a ways to go before they get their HEA, too. Until Alice showed up, I forgot how much information Bella had kept from her. Thanks for the chapter! Loved it! :)
glo4twilight chapter 24 . 4/7/2013
i so long for the updates of this i just love it so much! when i get it i read the previous chapter again just to basically prolong my fix!lol! then i read the new one but usually wait to read when i will have no interruptions! this was such a wonderful chapter. i love how edward just wanted to be by her side the whole time and his protectiveness! so frickin hot and endearing and well...just plain frickin sexy! and everyone else was so great too taking care of bella. i was soooo looking forward to alice and carlisle getting there but was a little pissed with alice. i get it tho but still doesn't mean i have to like it! as for esme and carlisle i do hope things quickly happen there...they would be so great together! and i do love jaspers way of thinking! mmhmmm can't wait for e&b to finally get those words out it will be absolutely awesome! love your work as always and can't wait for the next chapter and i just love them so nice n long just like edward...*cough*... and so full of goodness! lol!
Esme Incognito chapter 24 . 4/6/2013
Thanks,
Jen
rclaurel chapter 24 . 4/6/2013
Great Chapter, Loved It!
mountainlion718 chapter 24 . 4/6/2013
not liking Alice's attitude right now...i know she's scared but still, it's Bella's life
shaz308 chapter 24 . 4/6/2013
Great to see an update on this story. Glad they are all here now. Looking forward to Esme and Carlisle and jasper and Alice working out.
Canyaceme chapter 24 . 4/6/2013
Man! What a chapter! Thank you!
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