Reviews for Beneath The Surface
rubell chapter 13 . 8/7/2013
he is being such a chicken!
rubell chapter 12 . 8/7/2013
loved wpov...and i am sooo glad he didnt make edward actually
rubell chapter 11 . 8/7/2013
crying, for edward and bella...and wondering why edward thinks bella might be jaspers 'dream girl' when he keeps pushing edward to admit his feelings?
rubell chapter 10 . 8/7/2013
their best story yet, 'cept maybe their kiss, lol...
rubell chapter 9 . 8/7/2013
he is driving me crazy!'
rubell chapter 8 . 8/7/2013
the edward/esme scene was awesome, as was the jasper/edward scene just before (or was that just one scene with different characters? lol), what is up with edwards eyes?
Pates Greeneyes chapter 29 . 8/6/2013
Oh Edward! You are leading with your head and not your heart at times. Buuuut, I also understand it. This is completely new for him! He will get there! I love that Bella just asked him to let her in and not push her away! These two are freaking A-DOR-A-BLE together. They both bring out the best in each other without even knowing or realizing it!

Thumper! Cuuuute name! And the peguins were freaking perfect! Alice was acutally completely happy this chapter! It is great to see that! She truly does want her sister happy and she wants to get along with Mase and Lee! Which is a job in itself! She will get there. Especially with Whit's help!

I adore Esme and Edward's relationship more and more every chapter. She is his mom through and through. She knew he was upset and she went to him to help clear his head and his heart! You can see the love she has for him.

I adore the reason why Edward took Bella's pic... because he could see the love for him in her eyes! LOVE that!

Great chapter ladies!
rubell chapter 7 . 8/6/2013
you actually did a blog?! thats awesome!
rubell chapter 6 . 8/6/2013
whoa...big chapter! but i do think bella needs to tell them about her is only for edward worring that bella might be jaspers 'dream girl' didnt jasper already describe her enough that he would know bella was the girl?
rubell chapter 5 . 8/6/2013
lets hope it stays that way...bella doesnt need whiplash! lol...
rubell chapter 4 . 8/6/2013
what? what?!
rubell chapter 3 . 8/6/2013
edward just doesnt come off as a very nice guy does he?
rubell chapter 2 . 8/6/2013
whoa! what an introduction! lol...
rubell chapter 1 . 8/5/2013 her fear of sharks just in general? or is there a specific reason?
kselzer chapter 29 . 8/5/2013
Just started reading this story last night and am absolutly in love with it. I noticed that you just recently updated, but I can't wait for another chapter.
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