|Reviews for Beneath The Surface|
| chicalicious chapter 9 . 5/6/2012
I think my favorite part of this chapter was the beginning. I really enjoy Edward and Jasper's friendship and their interactions together. Jasper is so wise and Edward really should take his advice, but poor Edward is the boss and with that comes a lot of complications. I don't blame Edward for pulling away during his dance with Bella, especially considering they weren't alone. I wonder when Jasper is going to get to look at a picture of Bella's sister. WIll he know she's his dream girl? Loved the drawing and I loved that Bella has completely consumed Edward's thoughts and dreams. Great chapter!
| Hope4more chapter 9 . 5/5/2012
Sly. So sly. Masen getting her to mention sharks. Love seeing the interaction and how they are meshing together. Baby steps is surely Masen's pace. But I'm very excited to see how Bella reacts to their tagging. Of course I'm hopeful that SOON Masen will abandon his toddler legs and run full force at Bella. I'm positive she'd catch him. ;)
| muzaklover chapter 9 . 5/5/2012
Great chapter. I wish these two would quit dancing around each other.
| fcat5761 chapter 9 . 5/5/2012
| PINKSAPPHYR chapter 9 . 5/5/2012
Thanks for such a delightful chapter, even though I kinda want to slap Masen right now...Not only is he trying to ruin the best thing of his life, but he's only frustrating the hell out of me LOL...I want the incredible passion they shared on the dancefloor to be back! I want them to let their natural chemistry flow and give birth to amazing moments between them...
But no, instead Mr I'm-not-good-enough-for-her has decided to be stubborn and fight against his very obvious and already very strong feelings with all his might...Sigh, what a pig-headed shark lover :D
Speaking of sharks, I'm proud of Bella, it was a big improvement for her to be able to say this word! Now, concerning the videos, I hope she won't freak out too much...Or that Masen will be there to comfort her *hint hint*
Anyway, thanks ladies for writing such a captivating story! Can't wait to read more...XOXOXO Cecile
| OliviaJane chapter 9 . 5/5/2012
I love all the little secrets. Keeping things interesting. lol
| Twifan1228 chapter 9 . 5/4/2012
Love love love this story and yes, my heart is still aching for these two and the sorrow both have hidden deep within apparently...yes, yes...tagging in 3 weeks, so excited...will check out the blog always do...thanks for having it available.
| NoelleSeven chapter 9 . 5/4/2012
Love the way everything is building! It's only a matter of time before Edward and Bella give in to their feelings! I hope so anyway. :-) I'll have to go check out the blog later! I'm very much looking forward to the next chapter! It'll be interesting to see what's going to happen when they tag the sharks! Great chapter, bb! :-)
| Daisy Crazy chapter 9 . 5/4/2012
Another great chapter! I love the banter between Mase & Whit. There was some SERIOUS sexual tention there at the end. I'm looking forward to the tagging & more Mase & Guppy! :)
| AngelicAmanda chapter 9 . 5/4/2012
| irishmic chapter 9 . 5/4/2012
three weeks flew by. I like that this is piecing together little by little. Whit is definitely a keeper. He so has masen's number. And his dreams of alli. When will he go into bella's cabin to see her pics. There is one of his dream girl hanging there.
Exciting times headed our way with chapter 10. Thanks for updating. See you next time,
| stormy315 chapter 9 . 5/4/2012
great chapter...i dont think that edward wants to protect bella from whatever he seems to believe is wrong for her, her protects himself...cant wait for more...
| Kgunter34 chapter 9 . 5/4/2012
You wouldn't catch me dead tagging sharks. Great update.
| tds88 chapter 9 . 5/4/2012
Aw they were so close. The more they get comfortable with each other, the closer they get. I love the progression of the story as well as how and when you change perspectives. It's a like I can picture the camera fading in and out to show the different scenes.
| KimberlyAnnT chapter 9 . 5/4/2012
I wonder when and if Bella's story comes out if it will be just to Mason or the whole crew..at the same time