|Reviews for Beneath The Surface|
| CocoKoco chapter 19 . 12/23/2012
SO sOS SO SO SOS oS oS OS OS OS OS OS SOOOOOOOOOO GOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOoooooOOOooo OOOoooOOOD! LIKE JUST one of my favorite stories ever! The whole story line is amazing! ANd yeahhhhh! hahaha I am just really really excited right now! Dont mind me!
| stephi910 chapter 18 . 12/23/2012
i just found your story, and was not able to stop reading...really loving it...bella is so strong, to have gone through what she did, i know i never would've been able to even get on the water again, let alone do what she's doing...loving the characters, especially lizzie :) , and def glad that b&e are trying for a little something, and that he's stopped being so cold towards her...also kinda dying for whit to get a look at the picture in bella's room of alice, to see if he recognises his dream girl (if that's even her).
hope you guys update again soon, i saw it's been a little while, and i can't wait for another chapter!
| sulin0105 chapter 5 . 12/19/2012
Really enjoying your story here. Thank you.
| inani chapter 18 . 12/16/2012
Thank you for one of the best stories i've ever read in this fandom. And beside all the character stories which are magnificent,i have learned soooo much about sharks and marine life in general. Can't wait for the next chapter
Mostly a lurker but i had to comment on this amazingness ;)
Take care :xxx
| fonsy chapter 18 . 12/15/2012
one of my fave chapter!
| kantstopreading chapter 18 . 12/12/2012
What a great chapter, so much progress. And a little BBT thrown in. Loved that! Love these guys!
| soton chapter 18 . 12/11/2012
Oh I certainly like this new turn of events for Edward and Bella. Not sure though how long they will be able to hold out on progressing onto a more physical relationship!
| Guest chapter 18 . 12/9/2012
Finally he stops with the emotional obstacle course. The descriptions and the science were very interesting. Can't wait to pop over to the blog to see what's posted. You've really done some great research and have fleshed this out beautifully. Nice and Happy Holidays to you and yours!
| shenaniwhatagans chapter 18 . 12/11/2012
Loved this chapter...it doesn't matter that I probably say that every chapter cause it's always true!
Finally these two are making some progress. Do they really think that they will only be able to just kiss each other for the next two months? With their crazy attraction to each other everyone else is lucky they are humping each other all day long all over the boat *giggles* I kinda like that visual
Wow, Lee has taken Guppy into her little family of friends :) That's big news maybe now she can join Whit in his nudger ways :)
So, thanks again for all your fabulous research that you put into this story! It show with each and every chapter and since I do love all things sharks related I'm am very much enjoying it :) I wish all those shark shows on TV came with Mase *sigh* so dreamy
| Guest chapter 18 . 12/9/2012
LOVE this chapter!
Loved everything between Bella and Edward. Each moment is significant, from the words exchanged to the tender kisses, loving touches...all written just perfectly!
I did wonder why Lee went into Whit and Masen's bedrooms when their doors were closed, but it was funny about them zonking out like that LOL!
Bella and Lee's talk has me wanting to cartwheel around the room and smiling rainbows - finally my questions are answered in the best way possible. I'm beyond elated and relieved that there were only 'sister" kisses between Masen and Lee - THANK YOU!
Contrary to some other times when Edward/Masen has tried my patience and annoyed the hell out of me, I can't fault him this chapter, in fact I think I kinda adore him. When he's not trying to hold back his emotions..well he's really sort of wonderful. Guess Edward really meant it when he realised it was futile to keep his distance from Bella, he had already crossed way over the line anyways. It seems like they are both in deeper than maybe they realise.
Of course, you ended the chapter in the loveliest way, by having Edward want to be close to Bella and holding her as she fell asleep. LOVE IT!
| xbreathnomorex chapter 18 . 12/10/2012
LOVE this story! I cant wait for the next chapter!
| hotwardfangirl chapter 18 . 12/10/2012
LOVED this chapter!
Loved everything between Bella and Edward. I can't get over how tender he is towards Bella, seductive...and those neck kisses! Gah! So hot! The change in Edward now he is opening himself up to his feelings for Bella...well he's rather sexy and sweet!
I thought each moment between them was well thought out and paced just perfectly. It seems to me that they are in a bit deeper than either of them are aware. I love that Bella is giggling away while Edward is trying to be all sexy with her. They are both a little tentative and nervous, yet he needs to be holding her close all the time...so perfect! A favorite line of mine is when Bella says "Don't. Not unless you truly mean it". It was so necessary for Bella to make sure he was serious about wanting more with her after Edward has insisted on keeping their relationship professional for so long. And it's kinda hilarious that it's now Bella who is drawing a line in the sand for how close they can get physically, trying to do the right thing for their careers.
I am SO looking forward to Edward losing his mind trying to stick to their agreement to wait for a couple of months for more than kissing! Ha! He already can't stay out of Bella's bed! LOL! I can't wait to read more. The anticipation is killing me!
The talk between Bella and Lee had me absolutely elated. While I'm happy that Lee is warming up to Bella and they are becoming friends, what has me smiling rainbows is that Masen and Lee only 'sister' kissed! All this time I was hoping, and you delivered big time! Thanks. I am so relieved!
I'm so wrapped up in this brilliant and amazing story, I really love it.
You girls rock!
| Sweatermouse chapter 18 . 12/9/2012
Aww they're so cute!
| chicalicious chapter 18 . 12/9/2012
Wow, there was a lot of progress in this one! I'm glad that they have agreed to be affectionate with each other but not necessarily flaunt it for everyone to see. I'm also glad that Lee has accepted how Mase feels for Guppy and not only has she befriended Guppy but she is supportive of Mase and Guppy's relationship and how they feel for each other.
"You keep mistaking your anxiety towards sharks as some kind of personal failure and that's not what it is, Bella. It's a natural reaction to a traumatic event in your life. You never seem to see that just being aboard Galeos is a huge daily victory. You know we are going to see sharks. You know we are going to photograph them and document what they do. You know we are going to get in the water with them. And you still get on this boat."-I loved this statement that Mase made to Guppy! He acknowledges all the progress that she makes daily in every moment that she is working with MMR.
I also love that Mase has begun to call Guppy "kapu" as a term of endearment. So Sweet!
| chicalicious chapter 17 . 12/9/2012
Wow, this chapter was a tear-jerker for me. Edward being selfish and not wanting to let go of his mom really touched me. I'm in my thirties and I think I would still react that way to my mom talking to me and sharing her last bits of wisdom on her death bed. Its horrible. Now as for Bella losing Charlie. That was completely traumatic and I have no clue how she is even able to be near the water, on the water, in a boat, or even look at pictures, videos, or real sharks now. She is much braver than I am and I think Edward needs to appreciate how far she has come, whether she always listens to him or not. I am really glad that they both shared their stories with each other.