|Reviews for Witnessed here in Time and Blood|
| Folly1916 chapter 5 . 3/10
Hi! I am not sure if you still receives reviews as the story is a few months/almost a year old. However, having spent the last 5 chapters enchanted by your writing, I would feel disingenuous proceeding without saying how wonderful I have, thus far, found your tale.
As a general rule I have never been compelled to comment, however, (and I am sure I am one of many to say this) your writing really reached me. I goggled the word count of the HP series and your fanfiction (book) would have been the 4th longest of the novels. I am saying this out of admiration that you were so intrigued by a story that you persevered in your spare time to beautifully craft this work. Though this is fiction (the subtle mention of wands gave it away ;)), the creation and dissection of the world is all yours- I imagine you are a fascinating person.
Thank you, your words have been a joy to read and I am grateful for stumbling across your work, and look forward to reading the rest of it.
| Lauren chapter 18 . 3/7
SO LOVELY AT THE END CAN'T STOP SMILING xoxoxoox
| DOTLP chapter 18 . 3/4
I meant to read this story a year or so ago, but never got around to it (I blame school). I'm soooo glad I finally got the chance to read it. Your imagery is breathtakingly beautiful and vivid; perhaps one of my favourite scenes was when Fleur was looking for wand wood for Hermione. I love how you write in such a way to make me feel the emotions the women are experiencing, in particular their longing for each other even though they don't want to break the wedding vows; and how torn Hermione was after giving in to Fleur, especially when she thought she was hurting Bill by causing Fleur to cheat. Thank you for sharing such a wonderful piece of work, and I look forward to reading more of your Fleurmione stories.
| Guest chapter 14 . 3/1
You are such a talented writer. But you can only tease your readers for so long with Fleur's secret before it gets old and frustrating. While it is good to build suspense, holding out for too long can actually deflate the anticipation. Like right now, I Just feel like I'm plodding just to finish this story... Like a sloth.. Which is a real shame because it was such a page turner at the start. It makes it hard to appreciate the drama.
| M chapter 18 . 1/4
Have not been wow'd by a story in ages. Wow. I now appreciate HP more than I ever have. If you are not an author already (published) you should be.
| CACNTommyBoi chapter 4 . 12/3/2013
Seriously, I'm still having fits of amazement over how well you write, like I don't think I've ever found trees quite so interesting as when Fleur was looking for wand wood. And just for everyone's further reference Fleurmione might have a spot on my shelf of possible OTPs in part because of this story.
| CACNTommyBoi chapter 3 . 12/1/2013
LOL the comment from fleur about not being called Mrs. Weasley had me rotfl. interesting new magic and such along with blood magic? ftw! :D also Hermione's most personal possession is going to have a piece of fleur in it? OTP-EPICNESS!
P.S. that ministory had me seriously enthralled as well
| CACNTommyBoi chapter 2 . 12/1/2013
this actually makes the tiniest bit of me ship fleur/bill despite the implied fleurmione endgame. Also the explanations for Hermione's non-feels towards Ron make good sense
| CACNTommyBoi chapter 1 . 12/1/2013
wow, I aspire to be able to write like this, seriously, great job - the descriptions were epic.
| Aliyah81 chapter 9 . 11/3/2013
This was really nice! Ill make sure to read more of your work !
| Zyrl chapter 18 . 10/23/2013
I can't tell you.. how much I loved this story of yours. At one point, I was quite lost in my life and had forgotten that there was this story that I loved so much and it's not finished yet. Imagine my delight when I found this last night, early morning. It was akin to a little kid re-reading her favorite bedtime story (although I have not slept yet, and I do not blame you at all), and.. I just don't know how to express my thanks for you, writing this. You're simply amazing. I can't thank you enough. Thank you so much for sharing this. It will always be one of my favorite piece of work for this pairing. I hope all is well and lovely with you, please keep on writing!
| Artemis Noir chapter 18 . 10/15/2013
Wow, that was quite the adventure! Loved the story, but I had questions that maybe you'll answer in future tales- 1. You are all Veela or no Veela 2. Lily Potter's diaries were so well drawn out and I think you wrote that Dumbledore didn't want harry to read I wasn't clear why 3. I thought we'd hear more about the ladies from chapter 3 who fell in love.
Anyway, thankyou so much for writing. The love scene was exquisite, beautiful and so heartbreaking when followed by what happened next in the story. It was so well paced;, they didn't just meet and fall into bed, they had to deal with shit and made their union so sweet to finally arrive to.
I am looking forward to your future works!
| Bridgette Irish chapter 18 . 10/11/2013
I want you to know I finished this story on National Coming out Day in the US. Seems apropos. It brightened my day and I'm excited for the sequel. Thank you for an epic tale.
| Agron-Riveraa chapter 18 . 10/1/2013
GAHHHHHHH OMFG this was the most amazing fleurmione fic I mean it's so different to the others and I would have ever guessed that Bill was gay but omfg I'm kinda sad that this was more angst than fluffy bc I love fluff but still it is such a good fic and I really needed it especially since I hadn't read it before and I wanted some new fleurmione. I've hot to admit you almost lost me there in the middle but I guess the big reveal at the end got me really attached. I'm gonna go find some fluff now bye :D
| Black Ciel chapter 18 . 9/25/2013
Omg! To be honest, I read it all in one day...one bloody day! I can assure you, you made me go through a roller coaster of feelings! At one time i even threw my phone in my bed because I seriously thought this "relationship" was going nowhere! Well played, tho! I enjoyed your story, loved it even if it made me go through hell haha