|Reviews for When the Moon Fades|
| Wow that new god chapter 1 . 4/10/2013
Wow that new goddess was great, Annabelle, or Annie, no it's Annabeth. I never thought she was such a dirty little slut. I know she was that Jackson kid's girlfriend before I banished him. I think I'll go have a little chat with him about his whore of an ex-girlfriend.
| WhipShadow77 chapter 20 . 9/11/2012
i really like this story, make the sequel soon
| Jackarall chapter 20 . 9/11/2012
Awesome work as ever!
Is the sequel going to be written as a seperate story or are you going to add more chapters to this one?
| PhoenixRyder16 chapter 20 . 9/9/2012
AWESOME! Update soon!
| Halcyon2Days chapter 20 . 9/9/2012
| Fallon Monroe chapter 20 . 9/8/2012
Awesome! Love the ending (to part 1 anyway) and I love how Artemis' actions confused Annabeth. It does make one stop in think when they hear that Artemis chose to save a single life over many- as Annabeth (through your manipulations) said. It's obvious to the reader that Artemis' actions were driven no logically, but emotionally. Artemis chose to hold her son back, to protect him, despite that the lives of who knows how many children would be taken. Seth, however, doesn't see this. I wonder if on some level he knows, but refuses to acknowledge it. Loving the direction of the story and dying to see how Artemis and Seth's relationship develops. I would love to see them come to an understanding and even grow close, but the tension and strain make an interesting addition to the plot and for now I'm okay with that.
Can't wait for part 2 to start!
| Ronnie R15 chapter 20 . 9/8/2012
Great can't wait for the sequel!
| Musicality101 chapter 20 . 9/8/2012
It all suddenly draws to a close, *sigh* well its true when they say that all good thing must come to an end! And i must say this really was a good thing! Great book! Cannot wait for the sequel!
| LordofRhovanion chapter 20 . 9/8/2012
awesome, I hope you get they next story up and running, I have been following this story almost since it began, though I havent reviewed it yet. This is probably the best child of artemis out there, which is very few
| stonecold chapter 20 . 9/8/2012
BEST son of Artemis story ever. I love it SO much I'm so happy that you will make another keep it up. PS can you tell when you will update regularly pls Ty
| Lord Jace chapter 20 . 9/8/2012
Woot! My apologies for the outburst, but this has been a favorite of mine since I first started reading it. I greatly love this chapter and how it is written, especially the somewhat tense and unsure conversation between Artemis and Seth. But really, it was all just wonderful and I cannot wait to see the next one when you publish it!
| Crossoverpairinglover chapter 20 . 9/8/2012
At least their is a slight, glimmer of child to mother love at the end of this...
| Fangking2 chapter 20 . 9/8/2012
I think he needs to show mor ehatred to his mother. No child will like the fact he was 'created' for someone else's purpose. He needs to show more imature hatred that he can't help it since he is still a teenager and all teenager have anger/emo period
| Salmonie chapter 20 . 9/8/2012
I can't wait for the sequel, hope you post it soon! :)
| BampireVat chapter 20 . 9/8/2012
That was awesome! Can't wait for the sequel!