Reviews for Men's Room
fanfictionalcolic chapter 1 . 8/28/2017
So dark, so well written. We feel Bella depressive taste. We feel her hurt. But we alos feel Eward's struggle.
Rita01tx chapter 1 . 8/20/2016
When you made the rape warnin', you must have meant Edward's rape! He didn't ask for it nor did he deserve it...she fuckin' did! Gonna trust karma to take care of her and Carlisle!
2old4fanfic chapter 1 . 7/29/2016
Creep Carlisle. Goes to show a nice suit and shoes mean nothing
jk chapter 1 . 4/6/2015
I read the warning that was so fucked up..seriousy all parties here are just...fucked up
TinaF chapter 1 . 1/15/2015
Loved it!
KDMCAM chapter 1 . 9/11/2014
This was so good & so shocking! Completely brilliant!
meelee72 chapter 1 . 8/16/2014
Oh man, she's so sick.- U potrayed the darkness in her very well. The sheer & utter torment... wow.
- I'm really disappointed in the men.- I realize E was at gunpoint, but still...
That was the most disgusting Carlisle I've ever come across. Like, ever. Lol. He would not have Edward be a witness, but a participant, so that he is guarnteed to not get into any trouble. - E will be haunted by this, always.
& Bella... poor child. She so desperately needs help.
Very well done. I am thouroly disturbed.
Fleur50 chapter 1 . 6/8/2014
Jdifrans1 chapter 1 . 4/5/2014
You have an amazing talent. I felt her emptions with her. Indifference, desperation, anticiption, fear, excitement -all of it. What caught me the most off guard though was feeling her arousal. I never thought a story about rape could make me feel anything but anger or discust. Maybe it's because she wanted it even more than the rapist did. I don't know. Thank you!
Ivegotit chapter 1 . 10/4/2013
First of all thanks a lot for sharing it. I don't have any other words to say enough, so just thanks.
I am an Asian woman who came a long way here on fanfic. My language is not strong enough to explain what it felt like after reading this. Let me say I come from very small pond (very conservative, over shadowed, sheltered, misleaded, misinformed society and all) and only started understanding these stuff after I was 30. I think I can understand where Bella is coming from. And also to think at the end 'poor rapist Edward!' I must say you did a very fine job there. you made me see human side of rapist not only as the monster.
I hope and wish you do all the writing that makes you happy and satisfied, and I hope I come across many of your pieces. If you become famous and published and everything then I will be really glad to know that too.
Unknown Atheist chapter 1 . 8/18/2013
Powerful and dark.
Toni Masen chapter 1 . 8/4/2013
Hmm, strong emotions there.
roxxy87 chapter 1 . 4/24/2013
I don't care what anyone else says this story is hauntingly beautiful. Like the dying rose, there is beauty in the destruction. I think you did a great job.
EmmaDel chapter 1 . 4/11/2013
This is very good. Very compelling. You are very talented. This story is wasted as a piece of Twilight fanfiction. Besides the names it has nothing to do with Twilight. All you would have to do is change the names of the characters and submit this to a literary magazine or some writing contest. I don't know how it being published on this site would affect it being published other places, but you could check it out. Search Poets and Writers magazine and check out the resources they have there. If you are not published already, you should be.
newborntwifan chapter 1 . 3/15/2013
nope, he chose it too in my opinion. I wonder what kind of person does this
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