|Reviews for Falling|
| Keepmovingforwar chapter 1 . 11/18/2012
| Trowa no Miko chapter 1 . 7/24/2012
| dids107 chapter 1 . 4/7/2012
This is very good! Cute, loved it!
| Ansa88 chapter 1 . 11/22/2011
that is all i have to say. O.O
this is just...wonderful.
| TheWickedWizardOfOz chapter 1 . 11/20/2011
erm...Lalalalalalalalalala? Well, you said reviews were "Lalalalalalalalalala" so, I suppose it works...
Anyways Your description is AMAZING! Little things like "ignoring the small amount of rubble that dropped from the edge at the movement" make it SO much clearer in the reader's mind, because often during a scene like this in television show or movie there is those random specks of rock that just fall from no where .
Robin's need to save Artemis is totally Robin . Since he's human, he feels the need to save ever other human And I almost feel like I should jump in use a deus ex machina and save Artemis, to save Robin's sanity LOL . But that would take away from your amazing writing
Why so negative Robin? XD All those "no's" I thought he was Negative Man for a moment ;P But, it is sweet he's trying his hardest for Artemis's life
I love that you personify the ground as the antagonist .
Robin and Artemis attempting to save each other was really...for lack of a better word, sweet and totally in character I love that the two human's on the team are the ones attempting to save the other, only to be saved by non-humans XD
HELL YEAH! Artemis is a fighter .
Oh no! There appears to be a typo: "You Gould be..." I think what you meant was "You should be..." or "You could be..."
Watching the both of them fight over who almost died because of who and who saved who reminds me of when my parents and their friends fight to pay for the bill XD It's SO amazing too, it's like you're being mean so you can do a nice gesture LOL
AWKWARD HUGS! I LOVE THOSE!
...Anyways If you endured my rambling . Great fic
| The White Rose Pianist chapter 1 . 11/18/2011
Wow! Oh my gosh! Amazing! Give me a minute, um, thus was really really good and sweet and serious all that other stuff that I can't type within thirt minutes. -Robin's Star
| ChuChuMarshmallow chapter 1 . 11/18/2011
You're awesome. xD I love how this turned out for you; it came out really nice. x3 I actually didn't have to force myself to read it as I have been with other fics. xD Great job! x3
| Jedi Ani Unduli chapter 1 . 11/17/2011
Wow. Hopefully Robin knows that deep down, she did let go.