Ichigo has nothing to be sorry for, Yoruichi was being a demanding bitch. You don't just grab someone and try to force them to do what you want.

I love this story but I want a lemon and for them to have babies, please.

I assumed lemon but no lemon but this was amazing thank you

I love the way youre going with the story, i eould never be able to write such an amazing story. Keep up the good work and i hope you are doing well

this story is amazing, you put through where threw should be, threw is the past form of throw. i love the story and hope it wil continue. i love how you write the characters, keep up the amazing work

An interesting story

Horrible writing. So many fucking mistakes. You certainly don't know how to write a story.

make more chapters of catnip man I really like this story

Make more chapters of catnip please

I like how most of the story makes sense and everyone is calm but then? Bamm! Momo turns the tide with her comment in the magazine.
Also: do you guys know how difficult it is to write in a language your autocorrect doesnt know?

Take your time we don't want you rushing this.

and right as the story gets good it dies a horrible death. death by neglect.

Well done

Oh, that IS a threat. Not to diss Soi, but I would probably only barely avoid her Bankai, at best (and I'm fast and good at dodging as a human, imagine me as a Shinigami). And that's not counting the resulting explosion.

this was awesome can't wait for more