Reviews for Punishment
Zay373 chapter 1 . 3/16/2012
brooklynbabbii chapter 1 . 11/24/2011
just let the game go, matt...mello will rather yhu to around limping than come home to a dirty apartment...poor matt...i hope he can walk in the morning...
AngelKitty135 chapter 1 . 11/18/2011
The story was kind of a let down. I like the summary and the title but the story itself was to short and wasnt descriptive. There was no plot or climax to the story.
494dwangel chapter 1 . 11/18/2011
haha...poor matty but at least he had fun
MusicIsMyFate chapter 1 . 11/17/2011
Uhh, no offence, but that was honestly horrible. It needs more description, more graphic-ness, more of that lemony citrusy fun happening between Matt and Mello that fans crave oh so much. It also needs more of a rising-action leading to the climax that has the readers wrapped around your little finger.