Reviews for I'll Always Be There
godofmadness43 chapter 8 . 7/4/2014
keep going I wanna see what'll happen!
Forte De Tu chapter 8 . 12/5/2012
dude this is an awsome story, love it... if you can finish it soon that'd be great...
AmberChapkowski chapter 8 . 5/28/2012
I hope you update soon! This is a really good story!
mike11208 chapter 8 . 4/20/2012
Nice chapter man. Had some typos and errors here and there, but it was good. Can't wait to see what you'll do next.
Bored Failure chapter 8 . 4/4/2012
I like the plot of your story, but the number of errors in your writing is disheartening. Capitalization, grammar,... Etc. needs work. You should read your work carefully a few times before you post. Reading aloud or even just reading should be able to catch most of the errors. Even if English is possibly not your first language, you should try to proofread your writing more. Having fewer errors provides better flow and an overall better reading experience.
lixiaofossil chapter 7 . 11/24/2011
Since the story had forwarded to this point, please don't twist everyone's future.
mike11208 chapter 7 . 11/23/2011
This story is interesting. And to be honest, you took the ideas I had for my new SD story and made it pretty awesome. Keep up the awesome work. And if you can, check out my School Days stories.
zed chapter 5 . 11/19/2011
love it.