|Reviews for Narcissus|
| Mimi the Brave chapter 3 . 12/21/2013
I'm so sorry, but I couldn't get the image of a Gollum-like Sherlock wanking and saying everything with "we", it's too much xD but really, you make even the weirdest stuff work, it's miraculous... I am confused and somewhat flustered and breathless xD It's okay about the lisp, I'm happy enough with the short cameo it made xD
| Mimi the Brave chapter 2 . 12/21/2013
Haha, if you can catch laryngitis from writing then by god why shouldn't you get A-Class silent sex? It would only be fair xD and yeeeeeeeeeeeethhh...
| Mimi the Brave chapter 1 . 12/21/2013
Oh wow are they symbiotic or what xD Gotta love it! and "noodly arms", seriously? Had to laugh out loud at that one xD
| sevenpercent chapter 2 . 10/9/2013
How did I miss this first time around? Oh well, I found it now. harddest part of FF writing Sherlock is doing the decutions in a way that looks realistic rather than ridicuous. "really, really perhaps we've made our point" is a good approach to it!
Where do you come up with these ideas? So brilliant- lines like "You're thinking. That's what Sherlocks do."
| JuniorWoofles chapter 3 . 9/28/2013
"There's no one else crowding that crowded brain, there never really has been, there never really will be."
That, right there is why these two are perfect.
| JuniorWoofles chapter 1 . 9/26/2013
Yeah! The Skull's back. Does he/she pay you for every time you mention them or something? Or are you just best friends.
| DreamingDragon37 chapter 3 . 9/4/2013
I am curious as hell now if that lisp is from the BBC show...or if it was invented for the fanfiction writers (really, either works, but if IT IS ON THE SHOW...?)
| Desdemona Morrisa Raine chapter 3 . 3/3/2013
Well now...*blushes* that was something. Bravo! I swear I wish I was able to write smut. It's always fluff with me. Good story! Very nice.
| Guest chapter 3 . 2/25/2013
Sigh. Thanks for pointing me to this one, Wendy. You know, my life can be delineated between Pre- and Post-Sherlock, and later marked between Pre- and Post-Johnlock. I can barely remember the days, only a few months ago, when I was unaware of, and then repelled by, the thought of Sherlock and John kissing, let alone shagging. Now...well, their lusty sex life is the highlight of my day, (who'd have thought two men/penises making love/f-ing would be such a turn on?!) and YOU are one of the great chroniclers of that rambunctious sex. I wish I had started keeping a list of some of the ways Sherlock puts into words the importance of John in his life, nay, the way John sustains his life in the most base of ways, such as "you beat my heart for me" John is the lifeline of Sherlock on the cellular level. AND...I don't think I have laughed this hard at a story as I did in a couple of spots, like when John started the lisp. OMFG! Thank you, Dear. Okay, that's enough praise for now, don't want to give you a big head.
| R.Harper chapter 3 . 2/25/2013
Oh. Holy. Hell.
That was absolutely, insanely, gloriously hot.
I could read that all day, I swear. I'm following you on Tumblr too, and I saw the rabbit tail from 'Minutiae' the other day...oh my lord.
You're just fab.
| lockdownwatz chapter 2 . 2/23/2013
Quick note: that was supposed to say Sherlock's voice (not dyerlock) I don't even know what that is... but my phone decided that it made more sense than Sherlock. Stupid auto correct! ;)
Also... curiously... you can only reply once per chapter?! Say what now? So my comments make sense (hopefully) I'm replying to chapter 2
| lockdownwatz chapter 3 . 2/23/2013
Oh me! Lovely, lovely! Simply gorgeous! I soooo want to hear John/Martin do Sherlock/Benedict's voice. I've heard Ben do martins to some effect, but not the other way round. But I can imagine and that voice, god dyerlocks voice is orgasm inducing all on its own.
Oddly this made me think of gollum, maybe it was speak as we that did it, maybe with the combination of Sherlock agreeing in his mind? Dunno but I liked it. I love lotr and the hobbit so it's all fine!
| Nerdygurl4 chapter 1 . 11/16/2012
I noticed your note saying this is a sequel to Voice Over, but I don't see a story called Voice Over on your story list... is it somewhere else? Or has it possibly been renamed? I would like to read it if available. Thanks
| Puggle chapter 3 . 10/6/2012
Absolutely magnificent. Thank you so much for sharing.
| Doni chapter 3 . 6/27/2012
Absolutely beautifully done!