|Reviews for Everything and Nothing|
| Guest chapter 8 . 6/26
Plowed through this story and realized that Ryan is a lot like Ranma in his basic attitude towards those who think that they are his "better" just because of their abilities. However, lay off a bit on the god-like powers. Deus ex machina is great as a plot element but not a constant diet.
One of the other reviewers wondered why Louise was able to glomp Ryan and beat him up. IMHO, it's the Aether, kicking into harem-building mode - those females sharing an emotional connection are exempt/impervious to his "guard mode" settings. They can just walk through the wards that he would normally have up around him.
Can you do an update on this story or simply mark is as Complete if you have no intentions of coming back? Thanks!
Oh well, off to reading another of your fine and fun-filled stories.
| Zikarn Krais chapter 3 . 2/19
Why the hell would he feel bad about it, despite how badly she's treating him?
The idiot is a freaking bleedheart, it looks...
| Zikarn Krais chapter 2 . 2/19
Really? You just HAD to do the stupid duel, didn't you?
BS. Total BS.
| Yinko chapter 1 . 9/9/2014
Her incompetence is not his fault. Thus he does not have to 'take responsibility' since the responsibility is all on little miss fuck-up.
| Guest chapter 3 . 4/7/2014
Gary-suish much ? Ryan is not interesting at all.
| Reishin Amara chapter 8 . 11/2/2013
...Omg please continue this soon...he wins by pleasuring his opponent lol.
| Rickmer chapter 8 . 10/21/2013
Very interesting take on the series :)
Is this abandoned, or are you planning on continuing to write as inspiration comes?
| JesterDGrowlithe chapter 3 . 10/4/2013
was ryan in another fic? if so pls pm
| nick chapter 8 . 9/15/2013
good story. please update.
| Guest chapter 8 . 7/8/2013
amazing. the best lore i have read in a oc(?) story.
so, i guess it goes like this:
he comes froom an earth exactly like our actual one, but they discovered magic 10 years ago/in the future
-he said, after looking the two moons it wasnt just an alternate earth, and he was hiking in a location with a non-"terran" name so the magic was probably brought via dimensional portal from an already magic world-, that would explain how dragons,ogres,telepatic swords and succubi werent noticed until then.
soo... am i close?
| Guest chapter 1 . 5/9/2013
So... I've read your other chapters and I must ask how the hell Louise managed to pin Ryan down? Even without his special powers he seems strong enough to buck off a 16 year old with the physique of a 14 year old with little trouble. He must have secretly wanted to be kissed by Louise is the only excuse that would work seeing his strength, skill, and experience with women.
It pains me to see stories like this where the summoned is bullied by Louise into being kissed and no, not becoming a familiar doesn't really help matters in this regard.
| Thetorii chapter 8 . 5/7/2013
OH GOD I'm so waiting for this
PLZ UPDATE DUDE/DUDETTE!
| wqs chapter 8 . 4/14/2013
please hurry up and update this fanfiction story i want to read more of it.
| firelordozaie chapter 8 . 4/2/2013
A very taught tightrope you walk in this story. One misstep and you risk the protagonist being various types of Sue.
And yet I can't help but hope you tow that line as close as you can without crossing it.
| Lazurman chapter 1 . 2/17/2013
...What. I've never read a fic about LOUISE becoming the Familiar...