|Reviews for Who Will Rescue Me?|
| weepingangels75 chapter 19 . 9/16/2015
But...didn't Vanessa get cut on the arm with that same knife?
| CattyBlack chapter 3 . 9/13/2015
| Nelsh chapter 34 . 8/30/2015
Ok, so what I wrote earlier - funnily enough, most of the complaints I listed here before got a lot better in the later chapters. It's a good story. And as I said before - I admire the lenght and the writing. :)
| Nelsh chapter 18 . 8/30/2015
Ok, now, I'm sorry to say that - but this story is getting ridiculous!
I mean, I like it, a lot, actually. I admire the effort you put into this and that it's this long and quite well written, actually, but... just how can it be, that Vanessa is such a damsel in distress here? She never seemed like that kind of girl on the show. I mean, sure, she wasn't a fighter like Perry, neither was she super-smart like Phineas or Ferb, or even her dad, but still... She seemed tough in her own way. Stable and quite capable of dealing with all the ultra-weird things that were happening around her. This is just... argh! I mean, it's as if only Ferb could do the right decisions and it's... well, weird. She's not useless. Neither is she stupid.
Sorry, I don't want to dicourage you from writing, because I like this story. I'm intrigued and from time to time I even laugh at the right parts, but it's just... the characters are a little OOC (a lot) and shallow and the plot is moving too fast.
I'm really not writing this to hurt your feelings, I mean it as a consturcitve critism. I hope it's all right. And I'm very sorry if it hurt you in any way. It wasn't my intention. :)
| Mystic Fairy Tame chapter 36 . 5/29/2015
Phin *gasp* Phinease no sweetie, you are not naming your kid Ferb, just no
| Mystic Fairy Tame chapter 14 . 5/29/2015
He is not Dr.D.
Kim possable's Dr. Dragon or something is. Ask Shego yourself
Shego: got that right
| Blackwood187 chapter 36 . 5/22/2015
Mom, are you chopping onions?...Mom...
| Blackwood187 chapter 30 . 5/21/2015
I have a very tense feeling... I wonder why...
| Blackwood187 chapter 28 . 5/21/2015
I think there was garlic around somewhere, right... garlic? no...
| Guest chapter 25 . 5/21/2015
| Blackwood187 chapter 20 . 5/21/2015
Jk I not that scared, but still.
| Guest chapter 20 . 5/21/2015
I am scared someone hold me, MOM...
| Guest chapter 18 . 5/21/2015
Good enough for me.
| Guest chapter 15 . 5/21/2015
I feel... worried, should I be?
| WhiteLunaNight chapter 35 . 1/14/2015
I don't know if you wrote it or not but please write a sequel to this story! It would be the only thing i ask of you.