Reviews for Yokai no Oto:Sound of the Demon Part 1
Borello chapter 5 . 4/19/2018
this story sounds interesting.
Roland Tepes chapter 5 . 10/3/2014
This was a great chapter. please keep up the great work and please update soon.
sc13an chapter 5 . 11/24/2012
awesome story please please dont quit it like so many others i've read
notanathour72809 chapter 5 . 3/11/2012
ok so far i really like this story

female kabuto-only seen it once and it was in a fic that had everyone but naruto as a female so i classify it as rare so you already took it in a diffrent direction then i've seen

kind orochimaru-i kind of half saw that one time it was in a naruto tayuya fic and he was nice to start with but later on became evil

oto naruto-eh semi common but i've only read the way you used once before

itachi has a twin sister-thats a first

sasuke's father hokage-another first but since that's the case shouldn't he have revoked the third's law about nobody telling the younger generation about kyuubi?

the start of oto-never seen anyone even attempt to tell that before


ok thats about all i can think to say about this fic

can't wait for an update
TigrezzTail chapter 5 . 2/29/2012
I'm surprised and intrigued that you decided to incorporate the Wave mission. Very interested to see how things turn out. No Haku?
honorwolf1 chapter 4 . 1/18/2012
you said its crap i say its not as you leave no plot holes

suggestion: shion
adngo714 chapter 1 . 1/12/2012
this chapter is hard to read...the text is all bunched up together, and if she isn't already in the haarem, I vote for Hinata.
dayfox96 chapter 4 . 1/4/2012
Cant pain kick both their asses on a bad day; him running just dosent make sense.
TigrezzTail chapter 4 . 12/26/2011
It's too bad you feel like you are already struggling with this story. It has to be one of the more original concepts I've come across so far. I mean, how many people would think to make Orochimaru into the actual savior instead of a villain?
TeaDrinkertheknight chapter 4 . 12/22/2011
the chapter wasn't bad and am looking forward to reading more good luck
hooked reader chapter 3 . 12/3/2011
good story, few mistakes tho they rnt that bad

as for girls to put in samui karui koyuki(yukie) the princess of snow/spring
dark knight chapter 3 . 12/2/2011
Please continue to write.
Lazy Eyes Conway chapter 1 . 12/1/2011
You may have already made your decision, but I suggest Fu, the Nanabi Container
USAVet chapter 3 . 12/1/2011
Okay this is interesting and has my attention. It will be interesting to see where you go with this, but remember, have some fun too!
tstoldt chapter 3 . 12/1/2011
Another awesome chap now cause all my choices were shot down I got 3 more samui and if you can some how work it in a fem kimimaro and hana kibas sister
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