this story sounds interesting.

This was a great chapter. please keep up the great work and please update soon.

awesome story please please dont quit it like so many others i've read

ok so far i really like this story

female kabuto-only seen it once and it was in a fic that had everyone but naruto as a female so i classify it as rare so you already took it in a diffrent direction then i've seen

kind orochimaru-i kind of half saw that one time it was in a naruto tayuya fic and he was nice to start with but later on became evil

oto naruto-eh semi common but i've only read the way you used once before

itachi has a twin sister-thats a first

sasuke's father hokage-another first but since that's the case shouldn't he have revoked the third's law about nobody telling the younger generation about kyuubi?

the start of oto-never seen anyone even attempt to tell that before

naruto and orochimaru related-NEVER READ ANYTHING THAT EVEN HINTED AT SOMETHING LIKE THAT

ok thats about all i can think to say about this fic

can't wait for an update

I'm surprised and intrigued that you decided to incorporate the Wave mission. Very interested to see how things turn out. No Haku?

you said its crap i say its not as you leave no plot holes

suggestion: shion

this chapter is hard to read...the text is all bunched up together, and if she isn't already in the haarem, I vote for Hinata.

Cant pain kick both their asses on a bad day; him running just dosent make sense.

It's too bad you feel like you are already struggling with this story. It has to be one of the more original concepts I've come across so far. I mean, how many people would think to make Orochimaru into the actual savior instead of a villain?

the chapter wasn't bad and am looking forward to reading more good luck

good story, few mistakes tho they rnt that bad

as for girls to put in samui karui koyuki(yukie) the princess of snow/spring

Please continue to write.

You may have already made your decision, but I suggest Fu, the Nanabi Container

Okay this is interesting and has my attention. It will be interesting to see where you go with this, but remember, have some fun too!

Another awesome chap now cause all my choices were shot down I got 3 more samui and if you can some how work it in a fem kimimaro and hana kibas sister