Reviews for The Keepsake |
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![]() ![]() ![]() This story was just amazing from beginning to end.. but I loved how loosing his memory and gift actually made him see things differently and even tho he didn't remember her he still loved her but didn't become overbearing even after he figured things out and eventually remembered loved the ending and the name of their son |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love the significance of the bookmark. The title of your story fits so perfectly! I must admit that the epilogue was difficult to me. My mom died unexpectedly, not too long ago, and I guess I will never truly get „over it“, so I might be crying a little right now. I love Alexander and all the things you rectified, like Carlisle‘s and Edward‘s relationship. This story was a blast, I loved it, along with every OC of yours. Thank you for sharing this with us, it was truly a blessing. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ohhhhhhh that was lovely and unexpected! I love the solution you found for Kim. It‘s so simple, yet so perfect And I love that Bella and Edward have a new home now that is theirs - together. What a lovely story. Thank you so much for sharing it with us! I‘m a bit sad that there is only the epilogue left - I could have gotten lost in this AU of yours forever. |
![]() ![]() ![]() And another great chapter! What a pleasure to read, thank you! I was anxious with Bella, hoping that the old Edward wouldn’t come trough again. And I am proud of Bella, she is growing soooo much! Also, I love how much Jared still loves Kim. And of course it‘s great how accepting the tribe has become. Since you rectify all the mistakes in canon, I knew you would find a way to confront Bella with the reality of her choices. And I am very happy that she made the decision she did. |
![]() ![]() ![]() *gasp* I saw NONE of this coming. What a huge frikkin plot twist! I can’t believe it! This is such a clever way to show Bella the reality of a life as a vampire and also a great idea to let Jacob learn to deal with the whole situation. I wonder how Edward and Bella will feel being apart for so long.. Thank you for this chapter. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I feel very guilty. I just stumbled across this story and I am so smitten with it that I haven’t stopped reading.. Not even to make a comment. But you deserve all the comments in the world, because this story is brilliant. It‘s the exact kind of comfort story that I need so badly right now. I will try to behave better and leave more comments. Thank you for sharing this fic with us, it gives me so much happiness! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ok I’m ready for a sequel to this one. You covered a lot in the epi but I’d love to see it in a book. I’ve never read a story where she keeps both her parents. It was so nice seeing her be able to keep everyone she loves. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow. Just wow. Mind blown. NEVER saw that coming! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh this was heartbreaking! Such a good ending to the chapter though. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Holy smokes! Either I’m just enjoying the ride and not expecting anything or you are very good at surprises! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow you really know how to keep the twists and turns coming! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Well this was a rollercoaster of a chapter and everything I wanted! |
![]() ![]() ![]() My mouth literally dropped. Just when I was about to go do something else. Now I HAVE to read the next chapter! |
![]() ![]() ![]() This might be the sweetest gesture I’ve ever heard of! And the ribbon! His 1918 self would have been beaming at how she used it! I can’t wait to read more! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Esme was the perfect one for this conversation! Thank God for his realization! |