|Reviews for The Keepsake|
| hellishrose chapter 20 . 7/18
This has been in my to-read list for a long time. I must tell you I do hope you are still receiving reviews for the absolutely beautiful piece. I read this all over the last few days and I had many tears both happy and sad. Thank you for all your hard work and dedication to this masterpiece
| Alexise-me chapter 1 . 5/30
I'm a French reader, I follow your story since the translation of Isno and Zveka and I want to tell you in person that your story is just exceptional. So thank you for allowing them to translate it.
| Guest chapter 20 . 3/28
It would be an understatement to say this is by far my favorite fan fic, no doubt! Thank you and kudos to you!
| SilverDoe73 chapter 20 . 1/27
This was such an amazing story! So many twists I didn’t see coming. I stumbled across this story completely by accident and am so glad that I did!
This story has been so healing for me. I haven’t read anything this well-written in a very long time. You created such an outstanding balance of both Forks Edward and Portland Edward and gave Bella so much more insight post-high school. Everything you wrote was genius - Edward’s amnesia, Edward courting Bella, how Edward regained his memories, Edward’s closure after Bella’s illness, showing Jacob and the pack the goodness of the Cullens, Renee, etc. I loved the knock knock jokes (“moo”) and absolutely loved the ice skating, the snow globe/chocolate cake/ribbon, and the Alaskan sky full of stars. Alex Mason is sooo adorable. My heart is so full. Thank you for sharing this with us!
| Kksmum chapter 1 . 1/22
This is a wonderful story. I have read it and reread it many times. The ending always makes me cry.
| AdaMcRose chapter 10 . 12/30/2022
This is so beautifully written. My heart is in my throatThank you so much for sharing it!
| winterhorses chapter 15 . 12/2/2022
Sigh, I friggin’ heart this fic so much!
| santoskamilla.14 chapter 19 . 11/20/2022
Lindo! Que história esplêndida. Amo retornar aqui e ler mais. Espero que volte a escrever, e que esteja bem.
Seu talento é incrível.
| Camila0803 chapter 19 . 10/25/2022
Seyunda vez que que leio
| sinclispe chapter 1 . 8/21/2022
Somebody recommended this story on r/Twilight and I'm glad they did. I wish this was canon to be honest. Overall, this story is amazing!
| itsthefluorescents chapter 20 . 7/30/2022
Wow. Just wow. I don't know if you read reviews for this fic anymore since it's been quite a while since you completed this story, but I still want to write one to rave about how talented of a writer you are. I thoroughly enjoyed reading The Keepsake– it read like a professional book with a great arc and the story development had a nice touch of intimate moments that didn't feel like overkill. The way you wrote both Bella and Edward was lovely and you did a wonderful job of retaining their original characteristics while still allowing them to grow and change for the better.
Man, I truly wish this fic was part of the actual Twilight canon because you did justice to many of the things I have never been a big fan of when it came to the toxic nature of Bella and Edward's relationship. I always found it really weird that Bella was able to sweep all of the trauma she had under the rug as soon as she got reunited with Edward in New Moon and I love that you allowed both characters to express their emotions about the impact of Edward leaving. On top of that, the memory loss on Edward's end was a great way to humble him and prove that he can in fact change despite his unchanging vampire nature.
Overall, fabulous story with a great amount of twists and turns. Thanks so much for taking the time to write it!
| L-Anne Cullen chapter 12 . 6/16/2022
I was expecting their first lemon would be more...lemony?lol
| Guest chapter 19 . 6/12/2022
Loved the story!
| flanduslover1 chapter 20 . 5/17/2022
This story was just amazing from beginning to end.. but I loved how loosing his memory and gift actually made him see things differently and even tho he didn't remember her he still loved her but didn't become overbearing even after he figured things out and eventually remembered loved the ending and the name of their son
| shannaro-sakura chapter 20 . 4/19/2022
I love the significance of the bookmark. The title of your story fits so perfectly!
I must admit that the epilogue was difficult to me. My mom died unexpectedly, not too long ago, and I guess I will never truly get „over it“, so I might be crying a little right now. I love Alexander and all the things you rectified, like Carlisle‘s and Edward‘s relationship.
This story was a blast, I loved it, along with every OC of yours. Thank you for sharing this with us, it was truly a blessing.