Reviews for The Keepsake
Siriusmunchkin chapter 18 . 12/17/2014
Bella actually thinking about and facing reality is an awesome thing. No doubt the Pack will put forth a believeable reason why Jared has left the res. Bella wants her forever with Edward. She may or may not bring a child into their life. They will make he decision together.
Siriusmunchkin chapter 17 . 12/17/2014
This has been more of a whirlwind than last chapter. Bella's friends show up, she finds out what will happen if they decide on a child, set a wedding date, and all of a sudden everything changes. A friend and imprint of a wolf has been changed. The wedding is postponed and Edward and family members are going to help. Now Bella is getting a taste of reality. Can she handle it?
Siriusmunchkin chapter 16 . 12/17/2014
Very interesting chapter, from the flu to having a baby. The family is accepting Bella more every day. What does Edward want? We will find out shortly.
Siriusmunchkin chapter 15 . 12/16/2014
All good news for Jake and Beth, Charlie and Sue, and Edward and Bella. Though it looks like Bella and Edward are going to be the first to tie the knot. Wonder how Jake is going to take the news? Not at all well would be my guess. Bella's little stay in the cold and rain has not done her any favors. And Edward is panicking.
Siriusmunchkin chapter 14 . 12/16/2014
Very glad Edward has been able to reconcile the old and new Edward's into, more or less, one Edward. He had every right to be angry at Bella for being the whiney teenager who did stupid things to prove she was as much an adult as he was. SM did not like humans, especially females. She made them about as unlikeable as you can get. Bella has matured now and can see how wrong a lot of her actions were back then. This is all for the good.
Siriusmunchkin chapter 13 . 12/16/2014
Life is good in Edward and Bella's world. They are happy, in love, and engaged. Now Edward's memory and his mind reading are back. What is this going to mean for them? So far it looks like everything is still good to go. But what is Charlie going to say?
Siriusmunchkin chapter 12 . 12/16/2014
Kind of crossing my fingers there aren't any babies. Babies are wonderful, just can't picture them with vampires. Just doesn't work.
Siriusmunchkin chapter 11 . 12/15/2014
A drunk dialer and an upset child is much better than a wolf or a father at the door. Lots of progress is being made. Easy to see that Edward losing his memory and mind reading has been a very good thing as far as Bella is concerned. Living by his instincts has shown him that he can love, be loved, and just maybe be ready to keep her for eternity. Really like the premise of this story. It does revolved around what Edward lost that made him gain so much. So who has Edward been talking to that he knows it's possible for him to father children?
Siriusmunchkin chapter 10 . 12/15/2014
A new beginning once again. This time with Edward more or less knowing the truth even if he doesn't remember it. Bella's not going to upset him be immediately launching into the forever thing. Does she still want forever with Edward? Believe she does and will broach the subject at some point. Or maybe Edward will? And who's at the door that Alice is calling to warn about? Possibly Jake? Could it be Charlie? Or someone we don't want to meet?
Siriusmunchkin chapter 9 . 12/15/2014
Can you say 'Pissed off Edward'? Rather an understatement. Carlisle did the best he could, not sure how else he could have handled the situation. Asking Bella to keep her knowledge of his and their past was an iffy proposition from the beginning. Does Edward understand and remember now? Is he going to go back to the old Edward or combine the two?
Siriusmunchkin chapter 8 . 12/15/2014
Well, as they say, the jig is certainly up. Totally impossible to read Edward here. Bella is miserable but glad she isn't hiding behind lies or omissions now. Carlisle and Alice can't blame her. They certainly can't have expected her to see Edward on a regular basis and not let something slip. She was to comfortable and familiar with him. Should be a fun night at the Cullen home.
Siriusmunchkin chapter 7 . 12/15/2014
Seems like for every step forward they make in this new relationship Bella is having to bite her tongue. Not sure how Alice and Carlisle can expect her not to slip up and have Edward find out she's from Forks. Which could very possibly lead to all kinds of not good stuff. One of which is Edward has now discovered the bite mark from James. Can't wait to see how she explains this one. And just where is the rest of the family when she needs them?
Siriusmunchkin chapter 6 . 12/14/2014
New and different. Describes both of them to an extent. Edward is almost a new person because of his memory suppression and mind reading loss. I'm thinking he can no longer read minds because the only one he ever wanted to read was Bella's and he has totally suppressed any memory of her. Deep down he knows that if he reads the minds around him he will discover the very thing that he is trying so hard not to remember. When he lets himself remember Bella and realize it's okay to love her he will again be able to read minds. Except for hers.
Siriusmunchkin chapter 5 . 12/14/2014
The new beginning between them is stirring feelings and maybe even memories of the past. He is so very confused about why he is feeling what he is. There is also hope that if he does regain his memories that just maybe he'll be seeing the world in a different light. That just maybe he might be open to having Bella in his life for eternity. Will the cliff diving stir anything?
Siriusmunchkin chapter 4 . 12/14/2014
Someone is more than a little frustrated. Also looks like Edward is realizing he's missing something.
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